this story is great... hope people will review..

dont lose hope! hehe! keep on writing...! =)

~seiusanatmi_01~

Nice, it’s a shame more people haven’t commented yet. I like this, it’s short and sweet and you delve into the thoughts and actions that aren’t explained and you dissect them tastefully. I always like reading stuff like this because often I wonder what he’s thinking in certain moments of the anime. I also have to tell you that you did a good job keeping them in character, Usagi isn’t too bubbly or stupid and that is perfect.

Only real constructive crit I have for you is to maybe read it over like a month from now so you can really look back on it fresh and fix up some of the spots that kind of stumble a little when you read it. The grammar and spelling and structure is really good, there is just a few spots that aren’t so smooth when you read it, it’s nothing big at all it’s just maybe there are different ways to word some spots. Over all though this fic is certainly one of the better written Seiya/Usagi fics out there and I encourage other people to READ AND COMMENT!

Keep up the good work, lord knows needs it!