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Reviews for: No Big Surprise
azab
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
i loved it
Khelc-sul Renai
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
So... Who won that match where they were both team captains? Which team finally won?

Did Ryoma ever get his revenge on Fuji?

Kintarou would go and start a friendship between the two.

Well written, and great job keeping it in character!
PynkPlayar
2009-02-06 . chapter 1
aww! this was a cute lil' friendship story.
meh -who won that one time? shall it forever remain a mystery? :(
really good! keep writing! :D
hi
2008-06-08 . chapter 1
wow, that was just beautiful!
Tressa
2008-05-07 . chapter 1
That was cute! I enjoyed that a lot. It was so sad how they dropped out of contact, only to run into each other in the pro circuit. Excellent job. I think their personalities are as such they could be friends. And rivals. Thanks so much for this story!
Zaya
2008-01-18 . chapter 1
That really was a good oneshot. Most people have trouble putting a whole story into a small frame, but you made it work. The idea of Kintarou and 'Koshimae' as friends is so sweet and while it doesn't really make sense, it's addicting. Thanks for putting it up.
Last thing: I think the idea of leaving it to the reader to decide who won was a good decision. Just my thoughts, though.
Black Out
2007-09-23 . chapter 1
This is a good story. Thanks for the read.
Shiraishi-K
2007-09-09 . chapter 1
Kawaii~~ so cute so cute peophin! i'm faving this :D oh, and your on my fav authors list, okay?
knighted lioness
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
WAIT WHO WON?!!
CrazyGirlofManyNames
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Kin-chan and Ryoma friendship. I like that idea very much, just the thought of them interacting makes me giggle. Wonderful job.
Tuli-Susi
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
that was...so sweet...and it makes sense that Ryoma isn't world-famous that soon. It was just so sweet! I'm sorry, I can't stop gushing. The e-mails and contact was so adorable. And it made perfect sense that they lost contact. That's happened to me too. ...and trust Hiyoshi to make it to the big leagues!
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