Wow, interesting perception of Axel and Roxas's relationship. XD We always see Axel as a horny bastard, but the tables have turned and you still managed to keep them extremely in character. Damn I wish I could write like you. XDXD Keep writing! I look foreword to your next fanfic.

-wow!
-i like Roxel but i don't usually end up stumbling upon something like THIS[that's in a good way]
-but maybe im not looking good enough
-though my point is, i REALLY enjoyed reading this.
-anywayz:
-maybe i didn't notice, but i didn't catch any errors in spelling
-then again, i read too quickly
-anywayz2:
-i never imagined Roxas as such a horndog
-but i found his role as a sinful "little sneak" intresting
-im going to look at more of your work now

BYEZ--randomness: push, pull, press--

I kind of like that take, that Roxas is the horny one, then by consequence Axel becomes the stalker. XD

Very nice writing. Good work.