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| anon. 2008-08-31 ch 11, anon. | abuseyou know...fuyu no hana...sounds like that song from bleachmusical(fuyu hanabi)...the 4th one (if im not wrong). i like the tune. |
| .001Kamikakushi 2008-05-04 ch 15, | abuseso to express my liking to your story, i'll review! Matsumoto is a bit absent...mah. The fight was not that bad, however I feel like Hitsugaya is a coward here. He keeps panicking and asking what to do! Well, in fact, it's funny. I'm more and more fond of Koori. I still don''t know who he really is. good job. I like how you make some references to the second mobie. |
| Darkwrite 2008-04-12 ch 9, | abuse“Well, Toushirou, unfortunately for you, I do remember my zanpakutou’s real name, but I don’t think you’re worthy to even learn it.” “You’re saying like as if I’m going to be wielding it.” “Because you will.” “Are you saying…?” “Yes. Ukitake and Kyouraku aren’t the only ones who have twin zanpakutous, Toushirou. You’re the third one to wield twins.” “How is that possible?!” - - - - - - - it aint twin if they have different names. |
| Darkwrite 2008-04-12 ch 4, | abuseZARAKI MUST PAY FOR HIS INSOLENCE! go Darkside dude. ;3 |
| hikari_hime 2008-04-09 ch 19, anon. | abuseI'm just in chapter 20 so far. I like your story! but then i just realized... shouldn't Ishida and Chad gone along with Ichigo? you see, since they're going to rescue Koori... ok, chad and ishida may not come along... but since theyre going to save orihime as well... well... Ishida and Chad should have gone along as well... but since there is already chapter 23... i'll send other comments soon... if i'm wrong, then pls. just ignore... Love ur story... keep it up! Ja ne! (^.^) |
| juuban 2008-03-26 ch 23, | abuseUpdate soon :) |
| Synsacra 2008-03-22 ch 23, | abuseFinally! A new chapter! *breaks a glass* Ha, more on the Kurayami kyoudai, eh? Like the way you put the...the... ...italicized sections--it's gettin' interesting! Oh, and...about the 'Yuki no Houou'; it's reversed--The 'Snow of the Phoenix' is supposed to be 'Houou no Yuki'. 'Yuki no Houou' will instead turn into 'Phoenix of the Snow'. |
| tlsgowls33 2008-02-25 ch 23, | abusefinally new chapters! i haven't seen the movie yet.. plese update soon@ |
| Kawazoe Kazuma 2008-02-24 ch 23, | abusewhoa...reiatsu spiking...lolness...btw y did merenaito and meian cut themselves? |
| khooxp 2007-12-17 ch 22, | abuseyayyayyay! so cool! thanks for this supremely great story! |
| khooxp 2007-12-16 ch 4, | abuseso...many reviews??! |
| tlsgowls33 2007-12-12 ch 22, | abuseplease update soon!! |
| Kawazoe Kazuma 2007-12-11 ch 22, | abuselawlness...nvm abt that, i'll wait, jus make sure u come out wif gud quality chaps for the next few k? |
| RingoNeko 201 2007-12-10 ch 22, | abuseGetting more and more interesting! Can't wait the next chappie! |
| The Sinner Misha 2007-12-10 ch 22, | abuseMez: *blinks* wow their mother is... MN: *growls* A **? Mez: -.- not quite what I was looking for... Ata: sheesh. I've met Demons that are nicer than her. MN: You've met a demon? where? Ata: *looks pointedly at MN's spined and blood-coloured wings, fangs and 4 inch claws" I wonder. by the way, you Can power down you know. MN: *smirks and shrugs* I know.*slowly returns to looking normal* Ata: Anyway...Yet another informative and really great chapter!! update soon(er) please! Mez: Yeah, I can't wait to see them fight as one! |