Holy... aw. Stupid, sexy Aiden -.- Being a stupid, sexy player. DAMMIT! WHY DID YOU MAKE A HOT GUY A DICK!? >:O lmfao. I love this... Aiden's so... I don't know. There's no word for him. He's so Aideny... and it's awesome that you could show so much of his persona in two chapters. I love Celia's frailty and Muffy's whoreishness XD love it.

Damn... I would like, punch Aiden if I met him in real life and say how much of a jerk he is =P Especially at the ending, and I feel sorry for Celia. People who are obsessed with someone else always end up getting hurt by that person - in stories anyways.

-Griƒƒen-

What the hell? Why do you only have, like, five reviews? This story is kickass! I love Aiden's characterization, I love your use of words, I love the titles "Satan's Embrace" and "Tilt the Hourglass." god this rocks. I wonder who the certain lady is that Aiden's gonna warm up to... I doubt all the characters are introduced so far, but I bet it'll be Nami, seeing as she's the only one who doesn't appear to be interested in him.

a.w.e.s.o.m.e.

Yay for this story!! i am unhealthily obssessed with this game, and its not easy for me to find good fanfictions on it. (i have really high standards ^_^' ) aw, poor celia, i felt bad for her!! and im not surprised you made muffy a flirt, shes cool, but the sad truth is she is a shameless flirter =P



By the way, could you please update soon? Pretty please?

I like this story. The guy kind of reminds me of myself, but then again, I would have no interest in Nami. I am quite confused about Celia's age. You made her to be 16, but the original Harvest Moon story states that she is supposed to be 26. Oh well, we can make them any age we like I suppose. I don't see any spelling or gramatical errors, so you're good there. Also, your descriptions are very good. Nothing too descriptive or boring, just enough to let me know how everyone is feeling or doing.

Woo another great story coming from you.

The ending, the last bit with Takakura seemed kind of random to me... like, you just decided to put it in for the heck of it - not saying it's bad, that's just what it seems like.

Feel sorry for Celia.. can't wait for next chapter.

-Griƒƒen-

You said to review on here, because it would make you happy and squishy! So here I am!
*pokes squishy you*

I like the story so far. We all pretty much know how the game starts though, so I can't wait for more chapters to add uniqueness!

Also, I want to know why Muffy is so popular.
You have her as a flirt because in the game she says that she thinking hard-working men are sexy, right? She is a flirt for cripe's sakes.

Anyway, keep writing Tara!

Funny, for a minute I thought it said "Santa's Embrace" at the title.

Embarrassing misreads aside, interesting start.

Aiden looks like his love interest is leaning towards Nami right now with his deep curiosity in her. She seems to be the popular choice in AWL fics, but those two actually have a potential working chemistry. Of course, with an eye out for Muffy and none on Celia in the beginning, I feel like there's still a chance it can go a few ways.

Poor Celia the underdog. I'm hoping at least to see deeper interactions between the two, even if Aiden proves to be diabetic towards that girl's sweetness.

Oh, and might I suggest letting the anonymous community in on your reviewing? There's another story of yours that's got attention, and I have a feeling the anonymous people are a tad upset on not being able to give you some feedback. Good day.

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