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Reviews For: Little Cartoon Shop of Horrors

KingdomKey23
2007-08-14
ch 1,
abuseHey, guys. Good job on the story, it's not bad. There were a lot of funny moments in it. XD Like Ron's pants falling down, and Vlad's reactions to it, or Fry breaking the fourth wall as a flashback occured. There were some grammatical, punctual and capital errors, but overall not bad. The one thing I have to say though is I'm against the use of breaking into song in a written story, but since you two are my pals I'll let it slide this time. Good luck, guys. I can't wait to see who the Dentist is.

Key19
Annonymous
2007-08-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really like this story. Little Shop of Horrors is one of my favorite movies. Can't wait for the dentist number.
Keep up the good work.

P.S. On a side note Staredcraft-are you ever going to update "The Odd Trio" or has that story been abandoned?
charizardag
2007-08-08
ch 1,
abusedefenatly looks better here
tomboyishgirl108
2007-08-08
ch 1,
abuseAwesome so far! You and Charizardag make it a cool musical parody! (the original is always first, though). Update soon! Can't wait what happens to Ron next!
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