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Reviews for: Little Cartoon Shop of Horrors
Skullgal94 4/4/09 . chapter 1
Great job so far, update soon please and good luck.
KingdomKey23 8/14/07 . chapter 1
Hey, guys. Good job on the story, it's not bad. There were a lot of funny moments in it. XD Like Ron's pants falling down, and Vlad's reactions to it, or Fry breaking the fourth wall as a flashback occured. There were some grammatical, punctual and capital errors, but overall not bad. The one thing I have to say though is I'm against the use of breaking into song in a written story, but since you two are my pals I'll let it slide this time. Good luck, guys. I can't wait to see who the Dentist is.

Key19
Annonymous 8/8/07 . chapter 1
I really like this story. Little Shop of Horrors is one of my favorite movies. Can't wait for the dentist number.

Keep up the good work.

P.S. On a side note Staredcraft-are you ever going to update "The Odd Trio" or has that story been abandoned?
charizardag 8/8/07 . chapter 1
defenatly looks better here
tomboyishgirl108 8/8/07 . chapter 1
Awesome so far! You and Charizardag make it a cool musical parody! (the original is always first, though). Update soon! Can't wait what happens to Ron next!
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