That was absolutely beautiful! I'm crying now, and my mascara's running, but it was worth it!

OMG! I just love your stories! This one is AMAZING! I LOVE it! The letter Jack wrote is so touching! Brillant! :)

Aww.. so sad!! :(
It's beatiful, love it!

**GASP**

OH.

**CRIES**

**CRIES HARDER**

**Outright BAWLS**

(yes this means it's good - SO SAD but good)

**continues to cry**

NO HE CANT BE DEAD! *sob*

That is so sad! Your very descriptive, and I thought that it was wonderfully written and well thought out. I feel really bad for Elizabeth. She has to go through every day knowing that Jack will never be with her. Haha to Will though. He's so...If he can't tell that Jack isin't his son, I'd laugh.

Well done.

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Wonderful! Sad too, but above all wonderful:) I really loved it. The letter was absolutely beautiful! Well written. And the story idea... lol It did cross my mind, actually. Wouldn't that be great? *sneers at Will*