I can't read this anymore. You capitalize words that don't have to be and miss spell words and don't even keep it neat!

You spelled some words wrong. ...Quite a few actually.

I wanted to comment on the lack of empty space between to people talking, and stuff. But the whole story is just to hilarious to do so. Really well done.

Oh my GOD! IT'S BEEN LIKE TWO YEARS AND YOU HAVE NOT UPDATED THIS STORY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? GAH! Please update or I'll lose all sanity!

hehe there is a boy in my class who's voice sounds like a really high pitched 3 year old girl. But since its been stuck like that for 4 years nobody remembers what his voice sounded like. Great fic.
I can't wait to read on!

"Hay is for horses, You're a jackass I'll feed you later". *falls of chair laughing* Oh, that was good...

Are you EVER going to update this?
I'm getting so impatient!
Grr!

lol. love it! SO FUNNY. update soon !

-ALEXA

donald: nice tent sora

LOL ROFL

a couple of spelling errors i found:

nothign = nothing

siad = said

Lol, I just gotta say this:

BOM CHICKA WA WOAAhh.

your story is hilarious.

just to add you to my list.

LEMON!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Can't wait for your update! You've made me exicted!
-Mel

Congratulations. You've just made me more frustrated then I've ever been before. Thank god I'm home-alone cause I migh have killed my sister in frustration.

Dammit. I want to write too, but reading this is taking all my time.

I'm looking forward to next chapter.