please keep going with this story its realy good i can't whaite to see what happens next

Wow this story is good hope to see it continued.

Oh my gosh I love this story! Please update :)

Thank you thank you thank you! Yay! Finally an update! :) :) :) :)

Ok. I will ask you once. PLEASE update! Otherwise I'll cry! :'(

Write more

PLEASE UPDATE! I AM ON MY KNEES! PLEASE UPDATE!

I love this story! It is one of the better fanfics that I have read. Please keep updating!

OMG I LOVE THE STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!

I CAN NEVER FIND ANY GOOD Expanded universe star wars fan fics that are actually good - and yours totally is! i actually think its the best star wars fanfic that ive read!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SON! i just started reading and OMG I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

thanks - i had a lot of fun reading the fanfic!

liz :)

cool. BTW its jacen.

Update! I adore the story. I also enjoy the J/Z paring.

You did an amazing job on this story I really do like it. Though I would suggest that you would be more subtle on how you present feelings between relationships of characters such as Jaina's view on her Mother-in-Law. You let the description hit in one paragraph. Try letting the reader develop the same relationships with the characters as the characters have done for themselves. It draws in the readers ;-). Please don't consider this a downplay on your story. It was well written. Please consider it a constructive critism. Oh and consider a writing career you are a good writer.

Very Nice You should Keep up the good work it is a great story

please update soon, this is really good, but you should have put it in the New Jedi Order section, maybe more people would read it there.

Word of advice, you should consider moving this fic to the Star Wars section under Movies, as I'd hate to say it but the YJK section probably isn't much traffic these days.