Too cute! Love tim n abby together. Can't wait to hear bout the dinner party, wedding, n maybe they'll finally get their baby. Hope to find out the conclusion soon, if possible. :)

Very OOC, too quick, and you need to learn how to use a comma.

I don't mean to be a jerk-but you didn't even finish it! :/

at the end of the first chapter it says "he" instead of "I"

That was great. Ever think of adding to it? Thanks :)

I hope she says yes! Thanks :)

Poor Abby and :)

Cute chapter. Thanks :)

This is great. I'd love to see TIm and Abby have a baby!Thanks :)

Great chapter. Thanks :)

That was really great. Thanks :)

wow

The description of this story sounded alright-but I find it difficult to read things written in first person...perhaps if it was re-written in 3rd person.

Is this story going to continue. I am really enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work. :)

wow great story i love it i hope u will continue it its really good and i hope they hav a baby

this is so cute!