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| KitChi 2008-09-30 ch 8,  | abuseit's amazing u call yrself an amateur wen u write so well.. i cant write a fic like tis evn if my life depended on it.. i like it~ a unique look of wat d akatsuki family is like n i jus cant help notice.. how fatherly pein is n how motherly konan is.. suc family.. i wonder who can b considered d first born..? tobi's definitely d 'lil bro'.. =p it's really sweet~ will definitely chk out yr othr fics~ ^_^ |
| Camilla-chan 2008-09-28 ch 7, | abuseThis is a really good story |
| Camilla-chan 2008-09-28 ch 3, | abuseThat was a funny chapter. |
| animeXloversX317 2008-08-16 ch 3, | abuseThat... was one of the sweetest fanfics I've EVER read~! I can't help but smile at how it's written. It's just so sweet and totally out of character, and yet for some reason, I believe it. =)Such an awsome fanfic~ - S a p p h i r e - |
| redclouds 2008-07-04 ch 8, | abuseMan this is such a great story, you should make more like these. |
| parvenu 2008-06-29 ch 3, | abuseI really wish you would write some of his other 'classes.' The stories amazing. |
| Ayase Reincarnated 2008-05-05 ch 8, | abusethere are no words to describe how awesome this is! |
| - 2008-04-21 ch 8, anon. | abuse** Brilliant! The first chapter was hard to accept, but it went downhill from there. The ending is really good and I like how you have made the characters. Btw, it's really ironic what Pain thinks in chapter 5. He wished he could watch all parts of Itachi(from diffrent points of view). His Rin'negan REALLY can do that :D |
| Artemis1000 2008-04-11 ch 8, | abuseWhat a beautiful and awesome story! I love the way you characterised all the Akatsuki and the way they compliment one another. The hints of PeinBlue were very sweet, too. |
| lildevil425 2008-02-29 ch 8, | abusethis is great. it gives akatsuki a side that not many get to see or understand that much since most of hte people after them only see the surface and never dig deeper than they really should. hope you keep up the great work! |
| StarDancer1234 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseA lovely story! Such a dysfunctional (or maybe not) family...I think the other characters of Naruto should see what the Akatsuki REALLY is. Wonderful work! StarDancer |
| Nanikato 2008-02-02 ch 8, | abuseThis was an amazingly insightful piece of work. I applaud you. I find the idea of the Akatsuki being a large family a very appealing idea. It is cute. ^_^ Sincerely, Nanikato |
| Zetsu's Other Half 2008-01-31 ch 8, | abuseI loved it! a great insight to the misunderstood Akatsuki! They are the anti-heroes in the series! great job! |
| aaattttackkkkk 2008-01-15 ch 8, | abuseAh. that was so beautiful! |
| aaattttackkkkk 2008-01-15 ch 4, | abuseaw, how sweet! |