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Gingerela
2008-11-03 . chapter 5
i really like this fanfic. good job!! hope your next chapters come soon1
anon
2008-07-02 . chapter 5
This is really good! It looks like you haven't updated in a while, so I'm dropping in with a review to encourage you. Go! Go you! Go-go-go you! *cheerleader stance*
It'd be awesome if you continued. The characterization is sweet and the story's amusing overall. Good, good, good stuff.
VermilionValentine
2008-06-23 . chapter 5
aww bless eds lil cotten socks ^_^

update soon
xfacexthisx
2008-05-17 . chapter 5
Yay apple pie and steaks and ED!
Great chapter. I'm excited to see what will happen at this dinner. =)
Just-Lynn-10310
2008-05-16 . chapter 5
cool, finally an update, lol. good chappie
E.Mahiru
2008-05-15 . chapter 5
Hmm, joint assessment, huh? That could really work in Roy's favor, I think.

Yummy, steak! Mm...sleep... I'm going to go to bed now, Update soon! It's amazing how much FF is being updated right now, huh? It's awesome!! I just wish Finals would be over so I could read it all!
fork-spoon-spork
2008-04-13 . chapter 4
>.< I dont kno if you've seen american pie... where the guy's dad walks in on him and the apple pie... >.< yeah.. prolly not. but anyways, back to the point of my comment - I kinda have a habit of skimming, and i didn't read a bit of the middle, and then I see al buying an apple pie... >.< my imagination went into overdrive. :] nice story
Ellia-chan
2008-03-30 . chapter 1
ha ha little lap dog thats kinda cute!
Potopie
2008-03-29 . chapter 4
I love this story to death. I don't review things that often so this should go straight to your ego *grins* Anyway continue please
E.Mahiru
2008-03-19 . chapter 4
Hmm... not seriously, but if some guy acted that way about a pie of his that I bought, I would wonder if there was something weird in it... like laxatives, XD XD. I'm terrible.

OH. MY. GOD, ED! DON'T YOU HAVE ANY DECENCY! I can't believe he went off into sex-with-Roy land while Al was still sitting right there trying to talk to him!
Pojo-san
2008-03-15 . chapter 4
Yes al u better get out of there as fast as u can
Zenna Jahan Skyfyre
2008-03-15 . chapter 4
omg! that was awesome! so cute!
Kawaii Kisu
2008-03-14 . chapter 4
Yay! Pie on Pi day!! ^^ Please update soon?
xfacexthisx
2008-03-14 . chapter 4
XD!!
Ed's reaction to his memories with Roy was PRICELESS!
I couldn't stop laughing while reading that. And Al was so awkward (I would be too!!).

Aww, Al shopping. =)
How much is 15 cenz in American?
Songfic Misstress
2008-03-14 . chapter 4
"trust Alphonse to bring the light of logic with him when he entered any situation" hehehe so true. :)
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