 Gingerela 2008-11-03 . chapter 5i really like this fanfic. good job!! hope your next chapters come soon1 |
 anon 2008-07-02 . chapter 5 This is really good! It looks like you haven't updated in a while, so I'm dropping in with a review to encourage you. Go! Go you! Go-go-go you! *cheerleader stance*
It'd be awesome if you continued. The characterization is sweet and the story's amusing overall. Good, good, good stuff. |
 VermilionValentine 2008-06-23 . chapter 5aww bless eds lil cotten socks ^_^
update soon |
 xfacexthisx 2008-05-17 . chapter 5Yay apple pie and steaks and ED!
Great chapter. I'm excited to see what will happen at this dinner. =) |
 Just-Lynn-10310 2008-05-16 . chapter 5cool, finally an update, lol. good chappie |
 E.Mahiru 2008-05-15 . chapter 5Hmm, joint assessment, huh? That could really work in Roy's favor, I think.
Yummy, steak! Mm...sleep... I'm going to go to bed now, Update soon! It's amazing how much FF is being updated right now, huh? It's awesome!! I just wish Finals would be over so I could read it all! |
 fork-spoon-spork 2008-04-13 . chapter 4>.< I dont kno if you've seen american pie... where the guy's dad walks in on him and the apple pie... >.< yeah.. prolly not. but anyways, back to the point of my comment - I kinda have a habit of skimming, and i didn't read a bit of the middle, and then I see al buying an apple pie... >.< my imagination went into overdrive. :] nice story |
 Ellia-chan 2008-03-30 . chapter 1ha ha little lap dog thats kinda cute! |
 Potopie 2008-03-29 . chapter 4I love this story to death. I don't review things that often so this should go straight to your ego *grins* Anyway continue please |
 E.Mahiru 2008-03-19 . chapter 4Hmm... not seriously, but if some guy acted that way about a pie of his that I bought, I would wonder if there was something weird in it... like laxatives, XD XD. I'm terrible.
OH. MY. GOD, ED! DON'T YOU HAVE ANY DECENCY! I can't believe he went off into sex-with-Roy land while Al was still sitting right there trying to talk to him! |
 Pojo-san 2008-03-15 . chapter 4Yes al u better get out of there as fast as u can |
 Zenna Jahan Skyfyre 2008-03-15 . chapter 4omg! that was awesome! so cute! |
 Kawaii Kisu 2008-03-14 . chapter 4Yay! Pie on Pi day!! ^^ Please update soon? |
 xfacexthisx 2008-03-14 . chapter 4XD!!
Ed's reaction to his memories with Roy was PRICELESS!
I couldn't stop laughing while reading that. And Al was so awkward (I would be too!!).
Aww, Al shopping. =)
How much is 15 cenz in American? |
 Songfic Misstress 2008-03-14 . chapter 4"trust Alphonse to bring the light of logic with him when he entered any situation" hehehe so true. :) |