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| Jocelyn Torrent 2007-11-08 ch 1,  | abuseI thought it was cute...However, there were SEVERAL grammatical and spelling errors. Happens to the best of us but if you have Microsoft Word, might want to do spell check on this story. again HOWEVER...I really did like it |
| kangaroos 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseok, good oneshot, but looks incomplete... so was paige dating spinner or not? bc she said that she's not and invited alex along but at the Dot, they were flirting... it'd be good if were some clues as to what was really going on. |