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| januarynineteen 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseSo after having read this for the millionth time or so (I'm a very self-indulgent person), I figured I ought to let you know how much I loved it. The naturality of this piece struck me in particular. I could really, really see this happening. Okay, needless to say, I can see a LOT of thing happening between these two sexy individuals, but this story and the way it flowed was just really real. So hopefully that made sense and now please get behind your screen and continue doing what you're good at: writing. In the mean time I shall just continue to what I am good at (indulging myself more with some of your stories, that is). |
| Space-Case7029 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Loved it and looking forward to others. Audra |
| xoSnickersxo 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseaw! that was amazingly cute! and it was for my bday!! ok, my bday's tomorrow but i'm still counting it as a birthday present, sorta. |
| Meg-Breanne 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story. I'm glad that you managed to incorporate their bond now that they've both been through something similar. Bravo. |
| DarkDreamer56 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseSnicker's love! Man, it's been awhile since I actually sat down and read some good CSI fic, and this definitely has left me craving some caramel nuggety goodness :) When Nick said, "Yes, ma'am," I nearly melted :) Is it bad that every county bordering Cuyahoga County (where good old Cleveland is located) has a tornado warning at this point? |
| CSIslave 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseaw... really well written. good job! |
| Mma63 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseOh my...I needed it to bright up my day! Aren't they so perfect together? Are just some of us who think that way? It's impossible not to notice the electricity between those two...hey writers/producers, ope your eyes! |
| jdcocoagirl 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abusevery nice... |
| heartagram69 2007-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome as usual. really loved it. love how you mentioned nick n sara's connection because both have been kidnapped. i'm hoping sara doesnt die and the writers explore that connection on the show, but hu knows what they'll do, stupid tptb. can't wait for more from you, lala |
| katydid13 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat challenge response! |
| denise 2007-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abusebrilliant as always |