I...just...oh my goodness, it's so beautiful. It's so full of raw emotion that my chest is feeling tight. I absolutely love this, your writing is AMAZING.

very nice

Interesting, but I would have liked some events elaborated more. Such as with Black, the Yule Ball, etc.

I've read this before, but it just now strikes me that the ending is almost exactly (or maybe exactly) the same wording as when Snape dies. It's creepy-cool and you are one wicked writer.

Superbly done. Well written, and it left me craving MORE :)

This is brilliant. I usually don't care much for female Harry stories (although I get why people write/like them) but you just made me fall in love with the very idea of it.
Your portrayal of Rose and Severus is really good. I love how Rose is so different from Harry and it's really amazing that you managed to make her character so complete, so very exisiting as though you had just written a 10 pages just about how the character is supposed to be. She's very alive in that sense, unlike other characters in other stories who are there but never really exist because they're just not deep enough. You did that really well and with very few words considering.
Also, your different Severus is quite well rounded. I can just imagine him being that way. In other stories, he may appear just the same but something is still off about it, but you made it very realistic. I really love that.

this is interesting.

Wow...

Well, first of all, had Harry been a girl... hm...

Sirius would never... hm... Azkaban... hm...

Wow! What a stunning, beautiful portrayal of Snape and Rose. I read the prequel as well, and would so love to see more of this world you've crafted--especially if Snape were to survive DH.

Thanks for writing this. Really impressive.

I nearly cried!
Honestly, I didn't think it would be so wonderfully written!
This is a fantastic story! (sobs)

poor girl. all these parental figures crushing on her mom via her. that's got to mess a person up a bit.

Really lovely.

Absolutely breathtaking.

Quite possibly the most enthralling piece of fanfiction I've read. Ever.

Wonderfully splendid, it made my day.

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Oh goodness, that was awesome. I loved all the emotion packed so concisely into the chapter! And it was very well written, especially the part with Sirius abusing Rose sexually, it was very appropriate and delicate. I liked how well you made Harry into Rose, sometimes I read ones where it is very awkward, but I could see Rose as I read this and it wasn't hard to picture Harry as a girl because you created an entirely new character. I love it, love it, love it!
My only wish was that it was longer!


Happy Writings!

Hmm, now Snivellus is not just a greasy bastard but a pedophile to boot, eh? ;-)

Good plot bunny.