A very sweet depiction of Eomer and Lothiriel's first meeting! Your vivid description and focus on subtle dialogue really helped to make this a thoroughly enjoyable read.

Thanks, EvadneNyx

Very cute but short! I like the sublety you use when you write their interactions, and though nothing much happened, it felt very romantic and intimate at once! I would definitely enjoy a sequel!

You don't see these two in the movie, and I don't remember them from the books (egads, it's been YEARS since I read them.) But you made it fresh and intriguing to read, and THAT is what makes this story so wonderful.

quite a fun piece to read before your new story today.

Goodness! How on earth did I miss this story? Methinks I'd best go wander through your "list" and see what else I've overlooked! Quite delightful, and a most unique meeting for my favorite couple!

- Deandra

I like this story very much. I also like your writing style. I would welcome an addition!

It took me a few reads to figure it out. I was tired. I thought it really WAS Idril and Helm and that you were comparing them to Lothiriel and Eomer. Ah, well. I figured it out in the end.

YES! Absolutly, you should continue with it :D

Aw. This was so cute. I love the end, when they were talking about Idril and Helm. The lightness of the story was especially nice; so many Eomer/Lothiriel stories are dark-ish. Maybe not so many, but . . .Anyway, I liked this story. It'd be nice of you continued it, but obviously it's up to you.

Seize the Day!

Aww that's so cute - great job!

I really enjoyed this one. It holds to the innocence and freshness of what Tolkien said the times after the war were like. Thanks! Good luck with the other stories! :0

That's very nice! Lovely description of her dancing in the rain and I like the idea of the 'assumed' names. I would very much enjoy reading a companion piece to this.

And I'm sorry to hear you're having trouble with your other story. I had wondered what had happened to it! May the muse be with you ;-)

Lia

I like this. I love the ways that Eomer and Lothiriel meet for the first time. Elwen.

I really loved this story it was beautyful.

This was a lovely story-please, please do the companion piece.I want more of Eomer & Lothiriel discovering each other :D

Very well done.