|Reviews for The Deserted Courtyard|
| EvadneNyx 6/5/11 . chapter 1
A very sweet depiction of Eomer and Lothiriel's first meeting! Your vivid description and focus on subtle dialogue really helped to make this a thoroughly enjoyable read.
| RedCinders 12/16/09 . chapter 1
Very cute but short! I like the sublety you use when you write their interactions, and though nothing much happened, it felt very romantic and intimate at once! I would definitely enjoy a sequel!
| trecebo 10/29/08 . chapter 1
You don't see these two in the movie, and I don't remember them from the books (egads, it's been YEARS since I read them.) But you made it fresh and intriguing to read, and THAT is what makes this story so wonderful.
| wondereye 2/27/08 . chapter 1
quite a fun piece to read before your new story today.
| Deandra 2/25/08 . chapter 1
Goodness! How on earth did I miss this story? Methinks I'd best go wander through your "list" and see what else I've overlooked! Quite delightful, and a most unique meeting for my favorite couple!
| Haarajot 1/15/08 . chapter 1
I like this story very much. I also like your writing style. I would welcome an addition!
| Siriusly Loopy 12/9/07 . chapter 1
It took me a few reads to figure it out. I was tired. I thought it really WAS Idril and Helm and that you were comparing them to Lothiriel and Eomer. Ah, well. I figured it out in the end.
| AHealingRenaissance 10/16/07 . chapter 1
YES! Absolutly, you should continue with it :D
| Lady Sorciere 8/9/07 . chapter 1
Aw. This was so cute. I love the end, when they were talking about Idril and Helm. The lightness of the story was especially nice; so many Eomer/Lothiriel stories are dark-ish. Maybe not so many, but . . .Anyway, I liked this story. It'd be nice of you continued it, but obviously it's up to you.
Seize the Day!
| Lady Anck-su-namun 8/9/07 . chapter 1
Aww that's so cute - great job!
| Taima1 8/9/07 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this one. It holds to the innocence and freshness of what Tolkien said the times after the war were like. Thanks! Good luck with the other stories! :0
| Lialathuveril 8/9/07 . chapter 1
That's very nice! Lovely description of her dancing in the rain and I like the idea of the 'assumed' names. I would very much enjoy reading a companion piece to this.
And I'm sorry to hear you're having trouble with your other story. I had wondered what had happened to it! May the muse be with you ;-)
| Elwen of Lorien 8/9/07 . chapter 1
I like this. I love the ways that Eomer and Lothiriel meet for the first time. Elwen.
| spiritstallion 8/9/07 . chapter 1
I really loved this story it was beautyful.
| Ali64 8/9/07 . chapter 1
This was a lovely story-please, please do the companion piece.I want more of Eomer & Lothiriel discovering each other :D
Very well done.