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| julsus 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseNice to see you back Jess :) Liked the emotion and it fits that Bones would feel this way. I wouldn't mind if you expanded this with extra chapters. It's a pleasure to read your ff. - Suze :D |
| Knuckles515 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI VOTE THREE CHAPTERS! i'm thinkin next one, booth's pov and recovery attempt, third one, angsty resolution. but that's just my idea. just thought you should know that at least one person wants you to continue at least a little bit more. |
| caroldpb 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseGood job and I will be waitting for more. |
| btvsfifi 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abusewoah! I know a really good song that would go with that: Likin Park-What I've done! Fabbie fic! Fiona |
| mag31 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseHey Stretchie! I'm glad you posted your story ;) I already read it of course, but as I was not one of the judges, I didn't really told you how much I loved it! It's kinda short but full of sensitivity. I'm sure we're a lot waiting for you to write more! A funny one maybe? I remember Maneater, this one was great! ~ Mag ~ |
| Zucht 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseHey Jess - Nice to see you back in the saddle. I really enjoyed the story, a topuch of romance, a dab of angst, mixed into introspection. Very good story. Are you sure there's only the one chapter? |
| Franklet 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI love it. you captured the way she was thinking and did a fantastic job of it. It's contemplative but it's not angsty, which is really hard to do! props to you m'dear. keep on going! |