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| J.Vengeance 2008-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseAWE! That was so cute! You're so good at the adorable/angsty stuff, aren't you? I'm so fond of those types of stories. =D Loved it! |
| smashing 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseNot a pairing I'd really considered much before, but ah, this story made me so happy ^_^ |
| Luni Sedai 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseD'aw,that made me feel all warm and fuzzy!! XD |
| slasher 2007-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! Totally awesome! I never even considered Willy and Charlie as a possible pairing but you really brought it to life. Thank you for writing! slasher :) |
| Jareth's Genevieve 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseAww! I loved that! And I'm not even a slash fan! "You're my birthday present, aren't you?" "Actually, no. I bought you a car. A shiny red - " HAHAHA! XD Wonderful! ^_^ ~JG~ |
| xxcreamsodaxx 2007-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseE! this is just so perfect! It's sweet and sad at the same time, and it's honestly one of the first fics of this pairing that doesn't come across as dreadfully creepy. Wonderful job. |
| Miss Becky 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuse*happy sigh* It's been a while since I read this, so I had forgotten just how beautiful it is. Charlie's uncertainty and doubt are just right for someone his age, and we can see the progress Wonka has made since the film. And together, they are absolutely just right for each other. |
| Yva J. 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseWhere to begin? That was a very sweet story, and very heartfelt. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the various flashbacks and seeing how these two characters came to better understand and relate to each other through them. I could feel the anger when Charlie was teased at school, too. It was a powerful bit of writing. While I am not really a fan of Charlie / Wonka slash stories, this one was so very well written and gently presented that I did like it. I am deeply impressed with the whole essence of your writing that says that love should not be encased in fear, and that what is right for one may not necessarily be right for the other. You have also written about key elements that people in everyday life encounter, and have done so with grace and tact. The angst factor was really up there for both characters and I loved how you presented the various aspects that led up to the realization of both of their true feelings. Very nice job. Otherwise, I can't offer anything constructively as you seem to have all the bases covered with grammer and presentation. If people wrote slash stories like this one more often, I might find myself compelled to read them. This was gently and wonderfully done. |