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Reviews for: Initiation
ryokablade
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
LOL XD LOVE IT!
This is SO freakin funny!
For some reason, I can imagine this as a Shinigami Golden Cup...
*5 stars* Good Job!
kaibasgirlx
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
ROFL! Omg, that was hilarious, running into Shunsui like that! What a grand twist!

~Téa
gotNoAccount:(
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
last line to story:

'Little did ether of them know that they where running through Kyouraku's shortcut on his commune to the local bar...'
Renji's Girll
2008-12-07 . chapter 1
Oh, yeah. Blushes for everyone. Shunsui will think he was dreaming!
Rabanete
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
I wonder if Nemu knew they were there xD

Hilarious.
silver-moon-sapphire-sky
2008-04-19 . chapter 1
Now that was hilarious- Good fic, well written, funny... what more can I say? Keep writing.
YumeEnjaku
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
-thinks carefully-

Hmm, Soi, Nanao, you should run as fast as you can, so no one can see you...(I feel bad for them DX)

=D
DeKayHawk
2008-02-21 . chapter 1
lol...nice idea!
Sir Edward
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
Yes!! ^_^
That's the greatest thing I've read in a while!! ^_^
Purely EVIL!! ^_^
But, to waste the chance to see two of the most beautiful women in the Gotei 13...?
Poor Nanao-chan... O_O
She must be terrified! ^_^
Keep up the good work!
Sir Edward
enchantedskies
2007-08-10 . chapter 1
*snickers* i like this!! ^_^ poor nanao and soifon...
darkangel1910
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Lol. That was funny. Poor Nanao.
Zz-Edge-X-Meirouki-zZ
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Hahaha, that was funny! SoiFon and Nanoa streaking?! Whew, and Nemu and the others probably told all the male captains that they'll be streaking there, huh? Well, I hope you put up more chapters! ^-^
RaeSJ
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Hahaha... loved it. Great job. Please write more.
JenovaJuice97
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
there should be a chapter two to get what Shunsui thinks the next day...
Yachiru has been scared for life by Shunsui...
the story was good..wow
windlily
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
It's so great that Nemu was the one who lied to them about the Northern hot spring. If she can't have fun, why not ruin it for the others too? xD And that no one, not even Hinamori, corrected her or tried to save them... It was great.
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