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Aquamarine Columbine
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
Oh...my...God...*chokes*

*shakes head* I cannot say how much I pity them right now...awesome.
ryokablade
2009-11-02 . chapter 1
LOL XD LOVE IT!
This is SO freakin funny!
For some reason, I can imagine this as a Shinigami Golden Cup...
*5 stars* Good Job!
kaibasgirlx
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
ROFL! Omg, that was hilarious, running into Shunsui like that! What a grand twist!

~Téa
gotNoAccount:(
2009-03-02 . chapter 1
last line to story:

'Little did ether of them know that they where running through Kyouraku's shortcut on his commune to the local bar...'
Renji's Girll
2008-12-07 . chapter 1
Oh, yeah. Blushes for everyone. Shunsui will think he was dreaming!
Rabanete
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
I wonder if Nemu knew they were there xD

Hilarious.
silver-moon-sapphire-sky
2008-04-19 . chapter 1
Now that was hilarious- Good fic, well written, funny... what more can I say? Keep writing.
YumeEnjaku
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
-thinks carefully-

Hmm, Soi, Nanao, you should run as fast as you can, so no one can see you...(I feel bad for them DX)

=D
DeKayHawk
2008-02-21 . chapter 1
lol...nice idea!
Sir Edward
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
Yes!! ^_^
That's the greatest thing I've read in a while!! ^_^
Purely EVIL!! ^_^
But, to waste the chance to see two of the most beautiful women in the Gotei 13...?
Poor Nanao-chan... O_O
She must be terrified! ^_^
Keep up the good work!
Sir Edward
enchantedskies
2007-08-10 . chapter 1
*snickers* i like this!! ^_^ poor nanao and soifon...
darkangel1910
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Lol. That was funny. Poor Nanao.
Zz-Edge-X-Meirouki-zZ
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Hahaha, that was funny! SoiFon and Nanoa streaking?! Whew, and Nemu and the others probably told all the male captains that they'll be streaking there, huh? Well, I hope you put up more chapters! ^-^
RaeSJ
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Hahaha... loved it. Great job. Please write more.
JenovaJuice97
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
there should be a chapter two to get what Shunsui thinks the next day...
Yachiru has been scared for life by Shunsui...
the story was good..wow
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