Lovely! I also am a big fan of Cousin Mose's stories, and I think you are very close to reaching his elevated heights of authorship. :) Really liked the way you didn't say Angela's name. Loved the color symbolism throughout. Enjoyed how the little familiar office supplies, spoon, yogurt lid, pink memo pad, etc. all become imbued with more significance, more weight, as Pam uses them. We feel like we are inside her thought process as she takes the next step. Awesome!

Way cute! I love when Angela gets soft.

This was perfect. Barely any of the Office ffics genuinely sound like Pam. I wish there was more :]

I really liked it. I feel like something was a little off, but I can't quite place it. I think it's just because I don't really know enough about Pam's character to know if you captured her correctly. But nonetheless, I did really like it.
And I liked what you did with Angela--I think that part was perfect, just showing how they are nice to each other without really admitting it.

*eyebrow* I thought you were DONE with fanfiction, my dear.

I really liked the shift from being reckless, having surrendered, to the fresh start. The color symbolism was great and I can actually visualize this sort of situation in The Office. Very cute.

I love it! Nice idea looking at through the lens of Pam-Pong. Different, and good.

Pretty good! I liked it...I've been reading so much fanfic lately...when the office starts back up again, I'll probably be a little confused...hehe ;~)...but good job! Keep going! I'll be watching...

Sweet! More writing from you -- I'm always glad to see that.

As always, I love your writing style and how you portray Pam. She is so utterly sweet, really. She and Jim, SIGH. I want a Jim. A goofy, adorable Jim. I think that would make life infinitely better.


Love the color symbolism here - very well done.