What's most impressive about this story is that the technical details actually make sense. If I think really hard and try to follow the procedures in my head, it makes for a logical repair sequence. And I did need to "think hard:" this is quite possibly one of your most challenging stories in terms of content.

That said, it is also freakin' hilarious. :)

...That was possibly the most exellent display of Hook's core personality ever.

No lies.

I don't mean this to sound like mindless praise, but considering that this story is a one-shot glimpse into 'Hook' it's quite...

INTRUIGING.

*laughs* I can totally see TFpr0n sounding like that - it makes sense when one thinks about it!

*thumbsup*

haha, that was fun. good job :)

Sweet even if I did not understand all Scrapper was saying!