 AutobotGirl6 2009-01-20 . chapter 1Interesting... Got a bit lost though. :) Good story overall. |
 tomorrow4eva 2008-04-05 . chapter 1Cool. I love how Starscream is all 'we're wasting resources' then when Megatron decides to ignore the Rappaxians, Starscream accuses him of being soft. Megatron just can't win. He must like the 'challenge' of having a 2IC that wants to kill you, because I cannot think of any other reason he hasn't killed Starscream. My sister is like that, and if I had a cannon attached to my arm, I'm sure only one of us would be standing. Being human I normally end up leaving the room...
Great story. |
 Taipan Kiryu 2007-10-23 . chapter 1Excellent story. You showed just with a few words the character´s personalities in a situation like this. Brilliant! Please continue writing. |
 The Great Susinko 2007-08-13 . chapter 1Wow. What a powerful story that beautifully illustrates the ruthlessness of the Decepticons. I think you captured it perfectly. Thank you for writing it as I enjoyed reading it! |
 Violetlight 2007-08-09 . chapter 1Good job! You protrayed the Decepticons in all their merciless glory, while adding the cold logic of their perspective. It makes the very survival of humans in the Transformers universe even more questionable, but then again, who cared about the human characters (or Rappaxions) in the first place?
It can be difficult to write from such a cold perspective. I applaude you. |
 MegatronsSister-WolfDramaQueen 2007-08-09 . chapter 1This is really cool story! Ive been looking for a story like this. |
 Riana1 2007-08-09 . chapter 1Brillant, what can I say-- I never have found a story like this before. |