That was cute!

you should add more to this, its really good ;D

wow this was Great I was really drawn into it, it made me want to read what happens next

That was pretty good (this is the first Foxtrot fanfic I've read). It's not too energetic and it wasn't boring. It really seemed like a summer day kind of thing.

I just wanted to say thanks for sharing this. I was just thinking last night that I'd like to see some Foxtrot fan fic and your story was the first that I found. It was really quite good!

First of all, I have to say that this is a great story/idea. It really got me interested. Lots of fanfiction I read a few paragraphs, and then I stop because it's boring. This story is intriguing from beginning to end.

If you have any more ideas, I'd like to see more JasonxMarcus stories (or anything) from you. ^^

~Fox

Yeah, I don't need to know about all that!

That was interesting... *slightly insane grin*