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Echo Of A Broken Heart's Song
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
Aw! The Luna/Neville scene was the best, in my opinion. So sweet- and Luna was so Luna-like, and Neville was so Neville-like! '"Are you going to kiss me?"' That is such a perfect Luna line.

Great job!
crazy4potter
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
aww that was really good. i liked the ending. *_*
Jennifer
2008-03-01 . chapter 1
Hi that story was brilliant i liked it alot. The only thing i'd change is on the first sentence when you put 'Hermione Granger' I think it should just be 'Hermione'. But besides that brilliant absolutley brilliant. I do have a question though. Are Malfoy and Cho interested in eachother or are they just friends?

Thank You,

Jennifer Roberts
mj-hedwig13
2007-09-08 . chapter 1
aw that was so sweet!
silvermedal
2007-08-25 . chapter 1
You ever have those times where you see something and you wish it had been your idea? Well, reading your Neville/Luna section did that for me. So brilliantly in-character! So marvelously Luna-like! So amazingly cute!

Ahem. Now that I'm done gushing, I liked this story (obviously). I love interactions between characters when they're new and fresh ideas. Of the whole story, however, I think your Ginny/Harry part was weakest. Not that it didn't work, of course, I just found it more cliche than the rest. Excellent story, though.
Moonprincess92
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
Awsomely awsome! I hearted it, many moments. = D
Crookedhalo
2007-08-21 . chapter 1
How lovely! I like the Draco/Cho. What an unexpected interaction. I like how Cho is not an evil witch. lol.

And LOVE the Ron/Hermione and Ginny/Harry and Neville/Luna! All very cute!
Happieranonymous
2007-08-19 . chapter 1
That was good! I've never thought of Malfoy/Cho pairing, but I guess it could work.
counteragent
2007-08-13 . chapter 1
Yay! Lovely.
drodjan
2007-08-13 . chapter 1
Wow ... I loved how in-character everybody was, especially Luna! That was really convincing, and pretty funny as well. Wish Ron and Hermione could've had a longer scene, but it was sweet!
blackolives10
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
This is EXACTLY what I've been wanting to read since Deathly Hallows came out. Thank you, thank you, thank you! =]

The Harry and Ginny scene especially is exactly how I pictured it. I've been wanting to find a story which captures that exact phrase, "We have time, Harry, so much time," and I've finally found it!
ShadowedDark
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
I liked this story a lot. I liked how realistic it seems. The characters are in character and I feel like I can see the conversation they have.
ballerinadoll9
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
aw
mortitia3
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
Really great, and kind of touching. I would have liked to have seen more Ron and Hermione though. Keep up the good work :)
Dessimated Dreamer
2007-08-09 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD!

this rocks so good. i only clicked it coz i was curious!

this is a great one-shot

my fayv bit was the harry and ginny bit

im puttin this on my favourites!
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