 Echo Of A Broken Heart's Song 2008-08-25 . chapter 1Aw! The Luna/Neville scene was the best, in my opinion. So sweet- and Luna was so Luna-like, and Neville was so Neville-like! '"Are you going to kiss me?"' That is such a perfect Luna line.
Great job! |
 crazy4potter 2008-07-16 . chapter 1 aww that was really good. i liked the ending. *_* |
 Jennifer 2008-03-01 . chapter 1 Hi that story was brilliant i liked it alot. The only thing i'd change is on the first sentence when you put 'Hermione Granger' I think it should just be 'Hermione'. But besides that brilliant absolutley brilliant. I do have a question though. Are Malfoy and Cho interested in eachother or are they just friends?
Thank You,
Jennifer Roberts |
 mj-hedwig13 2007-09-08 . chapter 1aw that was so sweet! |
 silvermedal 2007-08-25 . chapter 1You ever have those times where you see something and you wish it had been your idea? Well, reading your Neville/Luna section did that for me. So brilliantly in-character! So marvelously Luna-like! So amazingly cute!
Ahem. Now that I'm done gushing, I liked this story (obviously). I love interactions between characters when they're new and fresh ideas. Of the whole story, however, I think your Ginny/Harry part was weakest. Not that it didn't work, of course, I just found it more cliche than the rest. Excellent story, though. |
 Moonprincess92 2007-08-23 . chapter 1Awsomely awsome! I hearted it, many moments. = D |
 Crookedhalo 2007-08-21 . chapter 1How lovely! I like the Draco/Cho. What an unexpected interaction. I like how Cho is not an evil witch. lol.
And LOVE the Ron/Hermione and Ginny/Harry and Neville/Luna! All very cute! |
 Happieranonymous 2007-08-19 . chapter 1That was good! I've never thought of Malfoy/Cho pairing, but I guess it could work. |
 counteragent 2007-08-13 . chapter 1 Yay! Lovely. |
 drodjan 2007-08-13 . chapter 1 Wow ... I loved how in-character everybody was, especially Luna! That was really convincing, and pretty funny as well. Wish Ron and Hermione could've had a longer scene, but it was sweet! |
 blackolives10 2007-08-09 . chapter 1This is EXACTLY what I've been wanting to read since Deathly Hallows came out. Thank you, thank you, thank you! =]
The Harry and Ginny scene especially is exactly how I pictured it. I've been wanting to find a story which captures that exact phrase, "We have time, Harry, so much time," and I've finally found it! |
 ShadowedDark 2007-08-09 . chapter 1I liked this story a lot. I liked how realistic it seems. The characters are in character and I feel like I can see the conversation they have. |
 ballerinadoll9 2007-08-09 . chapter 1aw |
 mortitia3 2007-08-09 . chapter 1Really great, and kind of touching. I would have liked to have seen more Ron and Hermione though. Keep up the good work :) |
 Dessimated Dreamer 2007-08-09 . chapter 1OH MY GOD!
this rocks so good. i only clicked it coz i was curious!
this is a great one-shot
my fayv bit was the harry and ginny bit
im puttin this on my favourites! |