Loved this!! Not sure what happened in the end but it's really great. Liked the battle scenes too! Hope to see more of your work.

I absolutely LOVE this story!! ::nods head:: I really enjoyed the battle scenes, they really kept me engaged and seriously on the edge of my seat ^^ loved the entire story :) I just am really confused with this last chapter ::nods:: I don't understand what happened...?? omg please can you tell me??please?? lol because I LOVE the story! but I need to get what happened in the ending if im to enjoy it completely :) great job tho you wrote the characters so perfectly! :P

Interesting but not particularly conclusive. I am not quite sure what happened, although the story wasn't bad overall. It just sort of dropped off at the end, leaving much to be desired for, although it also leaves a lot to think about! Good job overall with writing this story!

Hm...I can interpret this ending in a about four to five different ways, but I suppose that's what makes this fic a nice read. Great job; it was fun to spend a bit of time reading something so entertaining. ^_^

-Puppy

Aw, poor Guy. *Hugs* He's who I play all the time...and you used some of my favorite artes in this chapter, so thoughtful of you. GO INDIGNATION! :D *Heart*

-Puppy

^^; I don't think it's very wise to let Luke's thoughts drift to that level of strangeness...though the entire "Doctor Jade" sidequest in the game would make one think of that, wouldn't it?

I can't tell how you make Jade's character so freakishly perfect. You must have some sort of invisible Jade Manual or something! o_O

-Puppy

Hmm...how amusing. The fic says it revolves around Luke, yet there is no Luke in the entire chapter. Not that I mind, of course. Jade is a an equally amusing substitute, especially when combined with Peony. Also, the 'artwork' scene was pretty fun to read. Poor Dist...

-Puppy

"If we aren't back by tomorrow, you can assume we have been slaughtered by monsters." That is just something that Jade would say...and I haven't seen the word "spasmodically" used in a fic in who knows how long. XD

-Puppy

XD If anything, Mieu is even cuter in here than ever. To think that I hated him in the beginning of the game...*Headdesk* Augh...adorableness is contagious...

-Puppy

...I still haven't quite found out why this fic hasn't gotten more reviews, since it's highly amusing to read. I have to say, your Jade is almost perfect in every form. I loved the "your actually a replica" line, even more Guy's reaction to it. The plot seems very intriguing, and I adore Luke, so it's guaranteed I'll keep reading. ^_^

-Puppy

Aarrghh,I forgotten to review!! I'm so sorry
Anyway,I didn't quite catch the ending.

Once again,I'm so sorry!!
But what you did to the ending is really great.

I was semi-right in what would happen at the end. ^^ Anyways...

The ending is pretty cool...it gives you somethng to think about. ^^

Uh oh. She summoned Lorelei...Hehe, I think I know what will happen next^^ I'm probably wrong though. Anyways, I don't think I need to say to put up another chapter soon. ^.^

Great chap,hoping for more!
Keep it up

Haha! Jeido sarcasam is great. It was great how he said that he could make an army Ions and Cantabiles for her. Anyways...another great chapter, keep up the good work^^!