I love your style of writing for these two characters--its very different but its very them. Its also very poetic and reminds me of how the mind does think--not always in straight lines, but slightly chaotic and colorful (love it when you add the colors and sensations).
You def. deserve more reviews.
And I totally agree with you about the imperfect kisses :).

I think this one's my favorite. It's such a sweet scene. Very good job!

i really like this! it seems quite abstract. i think i preferit that way too, because it isnt giving too much away. your use of language is amazing! good job!

valmont x x

Oh, I love this little fic! There is something really sexy about kisses not being perfect. Good job:)