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| Mac's Girl 2007-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome story Sini! Great job! I love how it comes together so well. Please add more soon. |
| Bronzelynx 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic! It was kind of melancholic at first (in a good way), and the end was all fluffy and cute! If something would happen between these two, as we all would want, they'd probably have to go through some kind of gradual change, becoming friends, building trust and so on... The OC:s felt real even though they were only briefly mentioned. Thanks! |
| an-angels-light 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseWonderful fluff keeping you warm inside. This story was beautiful and magnificent. |
| jeffandjimmieschick 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseYou need to update! I want to see Lindsay and Mac dance! And I'd love to meet the new members of the lab. Please, please please write another chapter! |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. I hope you do post more of it. Brandy |
| Lily 2007-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat fic, love the description of changes and the dialogue. The ending was incredibly sweet and so THEM. Brilliant! |
| MeltyFan 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseYet another fabulous melty story... Keep it up girl! |
| lullabymoon 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant as usual. I really loved this and it felt really natural. Nice to see everyone happy and fluff is always good. More would always be awesome but it really works as a one shot just the way it is. |
| mines 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abusehey i really enjoyed this! please PLEASE add more! thanks reply?! |
| Mishelle20 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great fic, you did an awesome job. |
| Emily 2007-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseGosh I loved this... You really should write another chapter... I didn't think the ending was too fluffy, it was pretty much perfect! |
| Avalyn 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseYou MUST write another chapter... I like how you placed this in the future and also told us bout the othe characters. Well done indeed! More,more,more! |
| Karen 2007-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was wonderful! I loved it. Please continue writing for our enjoyment! |
| InDe 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseHey... I LOVE this story... I have similar thoughts on the characters...This is what I was thinking...I can picture Mac and Lindsay becoming good friends and growing from there. I also think that Mac/Peyton will be over before it really goes anywhere, she seems too needy for Mac and Mac is too dedicated for his job and will forget dinners and dates and Peyton wont be able to handle it. Danny/Lindsay...both decide that being partners is more important than a potential messy breakup/ackward working relationship. Stella is getting a new love interest. Anyways...I hope you continue...I would like to see more MeLty moments! |