Me encanto tu historia.

it was a good story; and i love this couple. I can't see Videl with anyone else

haha really cute. gohan is quite a guy

Aw, I really liked THIS fic!

It was a little sad when Videl confesses that the possibility that her mother's absence in her life might have hindered her maternal inclinations worries her.I understand her worries and qualms as to whether she would be a good mother when she has nothing to really set her standard to.

I love the end where you see how deeply Gohan cares for her.

Brilliant.

i liked it

This story made me smile. Your stories...I dunno. They're just so perfect. Its so hard to find anything wrong. Maybe i'll find one or more in your other stories as i read them, but they won't keep me from thinking they're anything less than amazing.

I would love to hear more of the story! It's just beautiful You're a good writer! Please continue to write!

( I put you on my 'Story Alert' list, so I can see when there's more of the story - I'm eager )

Awe, this was really cute. It was nice to see something along these lines. I can't wait to read Fatherhood when you get it out. Nicely Done.

I makes sens that Videl wouldn't be as confident to parenting as fighting. They are quit different

closing line was cheesy, but overall a nice little story.

hey!

I liked it!1

All your fics are good! I have read almost all of them... but havent reviewed jejej

write soon!

Aw, this was one amazing one-shot! It was so cute :)

This was good. It's an interesting topic. You don't see that much if at all here. I couldn't help but get the feeling that you jumped a little at:

He started to look a little depressed.

“It can’t be so bad,” ...

I just felt like there was no transition between the two. That's about it.

Good job.

ShadowMajin

This was sweet .

You can really do every genre... I wonder, could you do horror, or something like that? No, wait, you should do something suspensy, suspense rocks.

Great one shot... sorry I haven't emailed you, I will do later, I promise.

Hugs to you too

(K)

What? *rubs eyes* a non-angsty/dark one-shot? WOW :)

Yeah, it is VERY light-hearted and not long, but it makes you smile inside, withouth being sappy at the same time!

I can't hardly wait to read 'fatherhood', I do have a soft spot on the subject (motherhood/fatherhood/baby blues/whatever).

I don't think there was any problem with characterization whatsoever, as you said... they're close friends, so it's normal for V to open up a little with him. And G it's a teenage boy, who usually thoughs of having a kid, don't cross the mind as much as it happens to gals :P (no matter how tomboyish they are).

“It’s can’t be so bad,” she said.

'It's' is the only thing I found as a typo.

Hope to read from you soon.

Nor