*hee* This is adorable!

BRILLIANT! I love it! XD J'onn's lines were especially fantastic.
Awesome job!

Ooh...try to make Flash speak Chinese next!
I will have so much fun laughing my ** off. And indulge him in the art of chopsticks, please.
And no idea what the difference is between China and Japan?
Ouch. I'm taking that personally.

It's pretty good, but I would recommend a few changes. first, sushi is Japanese, second work on your dialogue's delivery style, and finally try to include more characters.

You're good at this, aren't you?

I like. Once again, they're in character and... that's all there is to it. Flash narrating is so much fun.

I am adding you to my alerts-- this won me over.

yeah, totally love it.

Nice story. Very sweet. There were a few spelling problems and the fact that Tokyo and Kyoto are in Japan. But over all a nice read. I'd suggest reading over the story carefully after you write it so you can spot any spelling and flow related problems. Some parts flowed very well while others just seemed too wordy. Once again, nice story. I hope you write another soon.

I liked the way you wrote Wally, and think you did a great job.

‘Uh… yeah. I knew that. Ming. Nice name. Any relation to the dynasty?’

That was definitely my favorite part, although J'onn's tempered amusement to see Flash again was a close second. And nice Clayface action sequence. I assume his weirdness ties in with some overarcing (not a word until now) thread in the JLU fics you've been posting lately?

Get your facts straight. Tokyo and Kyoto are in Japan. In your own words, "Jeeze, Scarab Dynasty, get with the program. Recover your brain from where Clayface kicked it."

Holee **. (clutches face) I am absolutey, helplessly and hopelessly in love with this. Your writing has so much *style*. Wow. Really, just . . . awesome. The *charaterization*. Not to mention the sound affects and the . . . with the imagery and the . . .

But seriously. Great work. I really hope this isn't a one shot. I would be quite sad.

(My only criticism . . . Tokyo and Kyoto are in Japan.)