|Reviews for Love At First Site|
| James Birdsong 4/1/13 . chapter 2
Nice two chapters
| Priest-of-Gaia 8/9/07 . chapter 1
O. Nice beginning. Very interesting attention grabber...What will happen next. Two minor corrections...The description of her. "Sleeky black hair." It should be Sleek. and 10 lines down the sentence that says it took him 4 entire days an nights...forgot the d...just picking at it. _ I like the beginning a lot though...please continue.