Hey, it's me Ty-chou from Deviant art. DA doesn't work on my computer at work so I'm reading and reviewing from

I thought this fic was a great way to intorduce the sisters and become familiar with their abilities. However, I felt the part of the Autobots left something to be desired in how little they fought back.

Now granted, mechs like Bluestreak I'm not surprised he was caught off guard so easily, but Prowl? I really expected a bigger fight than that. Even if they managed to overpower him because it's 2 against one, the fight should have been bigger. And I really expected Optimus Prime to be waiting for them, not reading love letters and not noticing them come in. He is the leader of the Autobots. He should be more prepared than that.

There's really nothing wrong with your characters, just don't underestimate the cannon Autobots. They are Cybertron's finest after all.

lol more twin terrors
ohh now there 4 of them instead of 2
i forsee absolute choas in the future

This looks lovely and fun. Congrats on a great find!

That was cool.