OMG...this was SO beautiful, I know it's kinds late, but to that Sandie person who reviewed back in 2001, YOU ARE A HOMOPHOBE. THIS WAS NOT NASTY. YOU ARE A WORTHLESS PIECE OF CRAP TO WRITE SUCH A RUDE, HURTFUL REVIEW. AND IF YOU EVER SEE THIS , FUCK YOU. Ha ha, I REALLY loved this! It was SO touching! Good job on this! Ignore ANYBODY who flames you! They are just asses! _

wow. that was so..beautiful. i almost cried.

*sniffle*

There is only one word to describe this: beautiful. Enough said.

...If only this could be made into a real music video...
This was so sweet. I loved it. Please write more soon!
firedraygon97

;_; So pretty and sad

wow...that was very intense

Sweet!

*sniff* I really cried...*Sniff* Please write more like this! Please? I gonna read it again!

Damn..I nearly cried! You realy need to write more! :D

...that was beautiful...

I loved it. Please write more of these! The way you contrast Cloud's time as a recruit with his AVALANCHE leadership is wonderful, with all the parts in between to really show his and Zack's lives and the things that changed him. And the ending is brilliant; it fits in with everything that went before and is just so touching. Well done!

Bawls her eyes out. Zackkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!

**sniff** SAD!

OOOOKAY WHY IS THIS RATED G?

THIS IS NASTY