 Bizzy 2007-09-14 . chapter 1Very sad, nice take on the comment.. |
 The Your Mom Alchemist 2007-08-15 . chapter 1That was a good story. Keep on it! |
 eternal-angelic-innocence 2007-08-11 . chapter 1SO CUTE DUCKII!
.< Roy actually cries
I really like the part where he cried, and Riza's 'hand grasped his tightly clenched fist'
Keep up =] |
 HydeXgackT 2007-08-10 . chapter 1 it's nice. but it kinda lacks something... |
 MoonFlower '93 2007-08-10 . chapter 1That was sweet. Hawkeye's always taking care of Mustang. Nice fic. |
 Silver Blue Starshine 2007-08-10 . chapter 1I loved it! Good job! this was well written!
♥Starshine~ |
 winglessfairy25 2007-08-10 . chapter 1Hm.. This is certainly angst-y./ Though many have tried on this topic, I think this one is by far one of the best I've read. I really like your take on this topic. It's unique in a way that you're comparing the line "It's raining." with him being useless and not his tears..
And the Royai was very subtle, light-hearted but heart-felt. Great job!
Erinn~ |
 MoonStarDutchess 2007-08-10 . chapter 1I love it. Great job! |
 midnight's-fantasies 2007-08-10 . chapter 1kyahaha i never knew u wrote again XDD very short though o and roy should be useless without his gloves XDD sweet though |