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| J.G. The Gamer 2007-08-30 ch 3,  | abuseOh wow... the never to be told stories of Nibelheim. Such stories, and Cloud was smack in the middle of it all! Shame he had to be exposed to Camui if she was so ugly. Well now he's got Tifa which is a HUGE improvement. Looking forward to the next one! |
| J.G. The Gamer 2007-08-30 ch 2, | abuseHAHAHAHA!! This is hilarious! Not sure if it's seen as feminine, but maybe borderline metrosexual. Nonetheless, people should at least take some consideration into their appearance. Hopefully we'll see a little more CloudxTifa intimacy in the coming chapters too. Can't wait for the next chapter Chiban! PS: One thing that is undeniable is that Cloud is/was a Mama's Boy! |
| macalaniaprincess 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. can't wait to read more xx |
| Toons 2007-08-22 ch 3, | abuseLol so...I'm still really unsure of Cloud's orientation in this whole deal. =) I know you want him to come off as feminine but... well okay, does he like girls or not? You're killing me!! This was good. I dunno if chapter one or 3 is better...tough choice. I think 4 is gonna be great. Update soon! |
| Toons 2007-08-21 ch 2, | abuseHeheh!! OMG you're making Cloud TOTALLY a girl! It's hilarious! Tifa's little brush with nervousness was quite funny as well. Along with Cloud's reaction to Tifa's insult =) Funny. ;) Update soon! |
| Toons 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThat's cute. Seems a LITTLE, only a tiny tiny bit OOC for Cloud though. Can't wait to hear about his cleaning complex. |