Ah, how bittersweet. This ficlet explains a lot of Jon's childish behavior in the last couple SotL books. I like your writing style and your take on these little forgotten moments.

W-O-W. i am crying because that was so good. wow.

:( this really caused me to sadden...you have given this pairing a lot of thought and shown jon's true softer side. the one that alanna and most girls have falled in love with...

it was a really well written story...please write more on this pairing

ah - poor jon - well done gary!

Aw poor thing. I love Jon.

thats so sad...but really good.

Poor Jon! :(