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| kakashifan-0001 2008-08-27 ch 11,  | abuseGreat chapter. I think you should continue with the story, its very intresting. Please update soon. |
| smg.vf 2008-08-19 ch 11, | abusei like option two. i feel like jacob would never put any blame on bella ever. i like the idea of bella for giving the edward but bellas new family not forgiving edward and being protective of her. well whatever you choose ill keep reading!! Great Job! |
| CourtneyFirehand 2008-08-13 ch 11, | abuseOption One |
| summersgirl2526 2008-08-06 ch 11, | abusei vote option 2!! can't wait for more! |
| XSylviaX 2008-08-01 ch 11, | abusethis was so dark i didn't realize i was crying but i like it though |
| rosemary tea 2008-07-31 ch 11, | abuse2 |
| starr1095 2008-07-28 ch 11, anon. | abusemake it DARK please i need to read a dark book i have not in a while besides host but |
| SearchingformyEdward 2008-07-19 ch 11, | abusei thonk you should delete this chapter |
| Lucas McDrake 2008-07-18 ch 11, | abuseThat is so sad, but I prefer the darker version. It's more realistic, and it would make a better story line (in my point of view, anyway). So, 1 vote for Option 1, coming up. |
| littlexmissxcooperx 2008-07-17 ch 11, | abuseI love it! |
| Dea-Mo 2008-07-16 ch 11, anon. | abuseI liuke this chapter but i think that you should go with option 2 while at the same time keeping this chapter. Like maby Bella is upset but not completly depresed. So the only person that can help her is Edward and Annabel is trying to keep them apart so they have to start seeing each other secritly. But thats only my idea. I still like your story and i know that it will turn out awsome! :) -Dea-Mo |
| Emmi Light 2008-07-15 ch 11, | abuseI know this was posted awhile ago but it is great and option one is better. Great story ^^ |
| xXMizzBellaCullenXx 2008-07-14 ch 11, | abuseGreat story! Sure the experimental chapter was good... but i prefer option 2 cause i think that the part with la push kinda intruded into the original plot of the story sorry if im wrong do anything you think would be better! just please update! |
| I LOVE EDWARD144 2008-07-13 ch 11, | abuseWell honestly I don't care where you go with the story as long as at some point Edward does find Bella and they fall in love again that would be so awsome! |
| Abigail Elizabeth Swan 2008-07-13 ch 11, | abusecan u tell me what occ means? and i would like it if the story line was lighter thank u for writing this story |