 honeypioneer 2007-11-13 . chapter 9I don't think I've commented on this story yet...but I really liked it. Great job! |
 jimemon 2007-10-31 . chapter 9Amazing chapter, so sad to this fic coming to an end but you did a great job with it. Congrats! |
 NNP1981 2007-10-31 . chapter 9Aw...I'm so sad to see this story end! I've had such a blast taking this journey with you!!
I LOVED the conversation between Mark and Derek! What great insight...I never thought about Meredith and Mark having ANYTHING in common, but after reading that...It makes PERFECT sense! Derek put a sense of belonging and importance into each of them. Granted, at different times, and in totally different circumstances but he did that for them! I totally got it!
And yes, Derek saved Meredith, but she saved him as well! They are indeed lucky to have each other! Thank you for the conversation!
LOVED the bath!! And the fact that Meredith got in it on her own and was waiting to tell Derek about her nightmare...I LOVED the fact that she WANTED to tell him and wasn't shutting down as she usual does! Thank you for showing CHARACTER GROWTH! This HAS changed both of them...For the better!!
What can I say? I've loved this story from start to finish! THANK YOU for taking the orginal storyline and doing it the way I WISHED Shonda would have done! It STILL irks me that this whole thing was sort of swept under the rug and that while we got to see how it affected Derek, Meredith never really talked about it, as if it never happened. I was SO disappointed with how it was dealt with on the show and this story portrayed eveything SO WELL. Thank you so much for filling in the horrible gaps Shonda left us and for staying true to the characters atthe same time!
WONDERFUL, AWESOME job! Loved it and hope to read more of your stories very very soon! :) |
 mer.der.luver 2007-10-30 . chapter 9OMG!! i love the ending, what an excellent ending, good job! u should totally make a seqel; i promise i'll read! |
 AFan17 2007-10-30 . chapter 9That was really wonderful. I love how open Mer is with Derek in your fic. Although it took time, she's finally there, something the show has been dragging out for a few seasons now (gr). Love it, I assume that's the end end? Please start another fic soon! |
 Mrs.President.Jonas 2007-10-30 . chapter 9Amazing chapter!
First of all Derek is finding his way back to his best friend.(oor starting to..)
And meredith made a huge step, taking Derek by surprise. And Derek really deserved that. Cause he's been holding Meredith up the whole time, and finally meredith seems to learn and to let him in...WOW:P
Great work as always, you're doing a great work with the charachers...
-Christine |
 MerDerAddicted 2007-10-30 . chapter 9i always find it sad when a good story comes to an end. I've really enjoyed this and I'm always glad for a happy ending. Hope there is another great story in your future. |
 MissRe 2007-10-30 . chapter 9Perfect. A great ending to this story. I really enjoyed the new talking and openness between them. Again, awesome way to tie it all up! |
 MeredithandDerekfanforever 2007-10-30 . chapter 9I loved it. Thanks for sharing this fic with us.
Brandy |
 mbird 2007-10-30 . chapter 9I so enjoyed reading this; wish we could have seen this on our television screens! Thanks for writing this. |
 gaforever 2007-10-30 . chapter 9great chapter, loved the symmetry between the first and last chapter, with Derek leaving work after a stressful day and the bath, a perfect ending. loved how completely trusting of Derek Meredith is and Derek making an effort to patch things up with Mark. I think the candlelit bath scene at the end being the complete opposite of the first one was a perfect way of showing that all though she wasn't comlpletely there yet Meredith had/was/is working through her fears raised from drowning and was going to be fine.
Amazing story |
 mer.der.luver 2007-10-24 . chapter 8ah! u updated, i was so excited to read this and i oved it, more very soon please! |
 NNP1981 2007-10-24 . chapter 8Oh my gosh! That was an intense memmorial but SO well written!
I must admit, I'm not liking Alex on the show but I adore what he did for Meredith in just chapter...He basically said (without saying it) I know you're life was crap, just be honest with your Mom..) And I know part of him was thinking about his own past and wishing he'd been honest more. FABULOUS way to bring that in while still keeping it centered on Meredith!
I LOVed that Meredith finally, FINALLY got everything out as far as her feelings about her Mom and how she felt. It kind of reminded me of the scene between Ellis and Meredith on the show, except this time, Meredith didn't hold back! And I had to resist the urge to stand up and applaud when I read that (can't have people thinking I'm more nuts than I already am! ;) ) That was wonderfully portrayed...And I love that everyone was around to hear it!
Man, I adore Derek. I know it was tough for him to leave Meredith after such an emotional time, but I love that he understands that Meredith needs some time with Cristina and Izzie. I loved their conversation and the fact that Meredith INCLUDED Izzie and not JUST Cristina. I feel Izzie's frusturation on the show as far as that goes and I was happy to see that you make it aboutthe THREE of them!
I think Mer admitting that she knows she's lucky to have Derek is a HUGE step for her and I was grinning like an idiot when I read that...:) I'm looking forward to seeing what's next!
Another great update! Awesome job!! :) |
 Mrs.President.Jonas 2007-10-24 . chapter 8WOW, very very well written. This is so amazing, and I love your work. Totally understand about "real life" :P
I haven't posted another chapter in ages: )
Anyway great great great Update, and update again when U can:P
Christine |
 AFan17 2007-10-23 . chapter 8Great story. I love how you really deal with the issues that the show just ignored. And I love you betas! I can't wait to read more. |