Well I like the story and the backround it comes from. I hope you update sooner as I want to keep reading this.

this is relaly good,i like the story line and how its folding out.though i have to say Jer is very unJer like.he would never say 'hell' like that,or i dont think he ever has,unless lusted up by Jaime.but anyway i think,even though he is paniced and stressed,you need to make him more Jer like.other than that this is great and i cant wait to read more.

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very good cant wait to find out whats wrong and even better surpise with adam turning up

This is excellent I like how it starts & how it ends as well, can't wait for the next chapter of this.

Awesome. Written well, like how this chapter is. Can't wait 2 read more of this here fic.

Please Update Soon!

Hey, awesome story, I love Kelley Armstrong's books, especially Bitten, Stolen, and Broken. I hope you do update it again soon, can't wait to read more. OH! I was also curious about where the twins were, Kate and Logan, or is this all taking place before Broken? Oh well, either way, great story! Bye ^_^

keep it coming...I'll be waiting to read it!

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this is good can't wait...but I get annoyed at people who keep stories held hostage...waiting for reviews

Get story. Love Clay and Elena stuff. Please keep writing.

The story is good could do with more detail tho :P keep writtin!

Hello! I would love it if you uploaded another chapter! or...more than that would be even better! I love the books Bitten, Stolen, and Broken, and your story is awesome. please update again soon!! ^_^