 Quis Custodiet Ipsos Custodes 2009-07-02 . chapter 1Well, to use Ron's words ... Bloody Brilliant!
Laughed my head off (then spent hundreds of dollars on a sewing machine to sew it back on!). Brilliant work, and keep it up.
Quis Custodiet Ipsos Custodes. |
 madelinesticks 2009-04-14 . chapter 27LOL! I LOVE IT! PLEASE READ WHAT FUN AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! |
 LilyLunaRose 2009-03-24 . chapter 27Funny but confusing! HA!HA!HA! |
 fanie 2008-12-21 . chapter 5 That story was very very funny.please make more! :) |
 CrescentSapphire 2007-10-01 . chapter 8Oh, my various electrical appliances.. This isexactly-I mean, I can't breathe.
Of course it would be easier if I could laugh.
Dumbledore?! |
 CrescentSapphire 2007-10-01 . chapter 6Must... not... laugh
Oh dear lord, it actually hurts.
I am loving all the pointless points! |
 Ms. Critic 2007-09-14 . chapter 12 Okay that has to be the funniest chapter! Dumbledore is Santa Claus! Voldemort has a puking problem! The biggest problem is Harry is the stupidest person I have ever read about. Why doesn't Dumbledore do something? Why do the Creevy brothers throw up under Harry's bed? Why do they hide under there in the first place? Why did you steal my line? And it is really, "I feel so pretty I could like just die!" DON'T MESS IT UP AGAIN! Very funny y'all!! |
 Ms. Critic. 2007-09-14 . chapter 11 Okay quite a few mistakes. Definitely, beats, snogging, and too. Very funny! Just as long as Voldemort doesn't send me a Christmas present. I like the Fat Lady even more. Kay, very good, great writers, excellent dialogue, blah blah blah. |
 Ms. Critic 2007-09-14 . chapter 10 The funniest part of the chapter was the homework monster. Ew, gross!! You should have Harry wrapping his arms around Luna. hee hee. Malfoy is not the brightest...something or other. Yay!! |
 Ms. Critic 2007-09-14 . chapter 9 Why didn't the killing curse hit Malfoy? That would've saved so much stress in later adventures! FOOD FIGHT! That part was good though. These chapters are short. Go Hagrid. Poor Rooty. Good story!! |
 Ms. Critic 2007-09-14 . chapter 8 Dumbledore is funny! So is Ron!! Why would Mrs. Norris try to eat house-elves? They're too high in fat! She needs to watch herself as she's getting on in years. Oh, and I stopped reading TSG2 because it got lame and boring. This story is better!! I mean, I like serious storied, but that one was so boring! |
 Ms. Critic 2007-09-14 . chapter 7 Oh that was good. Making Ron curse Malfoy. You need to watch your capitilization. Very funny. But why did Nagi eat Pig? He was my favorite character!! I loved it when he almost died eating Owl Treats!! Ah, good times. I'm so sad the actual series is over! |
 Ms. Critic 2007-09-08 . chapter 6 Voldy has some issues. Some big issues. First of all, the students will TAIL off, not TALE off. I feel really sorry for Fred. I mean, he actually had to touch Snape's hair, I mean wig. By the way, is it going to be called the Secret Life of Snape or will it be titled differently? I think the Secret Life of Snape is a good title. Bye now |
 Ms. Critic 2007-09-08 . chapter 5 This is very funny! I don't have time to correct mistakes now, but there are some!! maybe before you posted it you should have sent it to me to edit. That would probably be a good idea when writing "The Secret Life of Snape." I'm clairvoyant, that's right. |
 Ms. Critic 2007-09-08 . chapter 4 Oh that's funny!! But I think a loose snake should cause more panic than that!
Also, in case you didn't know, the chapter isn't Sanke on a Train. I'm gonna keep reading now, because this is even funnier than Attack of the Killer Shrimp. |