Personally, I like this chapter =D The little Faxy part was just so... Fang >

hitting the skies with a big, bloody, pimple behind us and a monstrous zit ahead.

xD Gotta love it. Thanks for updating finally. I think the chapter was really good. Update soon. =D

-TT

do you plan on becoming a proffessional writer...cos.i.would so buy your books!

i just stumbled across this story and have just finished reading the first chapter and i am now hooked.

incredibly well written!

keep it up.

hami

xx

I love the story but what really struck me this chapter was the 'I love you this much' thing. Honestly, that was one of the cutest, in character and believable Fang confessions I have ever seen. Even if it was meant to be sarcastic or whatever, it was awesome.

Lovin' it, please update soon~

You updated!

That made me feel very bubbly inside, and I had a fax fangirl squee JUST for you!

Please update soon, I know where you live...

Wow, Erasers taking over the world. I gotta admit that's one I hadn't heard before. Happy very very very late birthday! I did get your quiz already, but I'm reviewing just because I can and all that. Your Max/Fang talks are a riot, Max is her good old sarcastic self and Fang is always protecting her and doing what's best for her...you, my friend, are perfect at these! I'd ask for more of those if I wasn't wondering about the Flock (both Max's and the OC Flock). So do more soon, it's almost been a month and I'm all caught up so I can review the moment you post! This would be your (obvious) hint to update please.

SHE LIVES! You didn't kill another one of the main characters, YAY! I mean...uh, very good then, Max is alive, this doesn't surprise me at all... So anyways, that was a little scary, I was really wondering where Max was, so it's good that she's alive and the Flock will be alright. Are you gonna write about the OC Flock next? Just a guess, now I may as well go and see if I'm right or not.

Aye carumba, that was some fight! I'd imagine the Flock would be tense when waiting for Max and Nudge to come back. Are they gonna rescue her? Had to ask. But the comebacks Max came up with sounded just like her, so congrats for doing such a great job on that. :) Two more chapters and then I have to wait for the next one like everyone else! Wow, that's a bit of a scary thought, I love reading this story when I come home from school.

(*blinks*) Whoa. That's one sad fight. Not in the sense of writing, of course, you described it better than I could ever manage, but it's just a little depressing to know that Pink was poisoned when I was getting to know her and like her. And poor Pete, but the description in which you killed him had some new thoughts, not something painful, and everything going in slow-motion...wait, they do it a lot in movies, but still, you wrote it like it was a movie and that's a good thing. Let's see how the rest of the fight goes, shall I?

Oh no, I quite love it, but the attack is gonna be so awesome! I can't wait to see what they do. :D And plus I have to wonder when the Flock is coming into this. Oh, now I remember what I wanted to say. (*ahem*) ELLA MARTINEZ! I can't believe I forgot about the Martinezes, now she's so brave and awesome! Gotta go to the next chapter like NOW.

I'm getting to like these new characters more and more, the rebellion is gonna be so awesome! Thanks for the filler chapter, it explains a lot and gets closer to the characters so I understand a few things now. :) To the next chapter...AWAY! (sorry, I'm not feeling so hot so I act weird :P)

Poor Iggy, Nudge didn't even want to try to give him his vision back. I feel sorry for him. The other characters are still confusing, but hey, I'll get it eventually! Now, to read more. You've got an excellent writing style, but you knew that, but I figured I'd remind you.

You're welcome for the reviews, sorry for the delay of my own reviews, your slowness is forgiven, onto the next chapter!

Whoa...who are those guys? They remind me of the Flock, but are they like some parallel universe or something? Sorry, this review might be a bit nondescript because I was battling my brother while reading so I only have a vague, probably incorrect idea of what happened. Fang and Iggy are pretty cool, I can't put my finger on it but something makes me think there's hope for them, and at least the rest of the Flock is doing alright. Maybe if I read a bit more then it'll make sense? Sounds good to me.

Who wouldn't like this story? It's some of the best action I've ever read! Seriously, can you tell me how to write like that? I'm stuck with some stuff. But hey, aside from that, it's unfair to the flock how injured they are, but at least they're getting better. Find Fang and Iggy right now! Oh, wait, there's more chapters. Well, better read those!