This is really fantastic! I can't wait until the next bit is out and when Zuko and Katar start likin each other!

Its beautifully written, especially the prologue!

wow! this is really good! keep writing!

I realized I hadn't reviewed this chapter yet so here it is.

It was interesting. You kept the plot going and gave us lots of character development.

Sokka's "I'll kill him," was priceless.

So update soon. Thanks!

I LOVE IT! it's so well written, and very, very enjoyable.

Great chapter! Keep it up!

VERY nice characterization of Mai and Azula; they were spot on. I also liked how you described Zuko's thoughts, of pushing away his doubts and believing Azula. It's true to his character and i'm guessing very close to how it will be presented in canon.

Looking forward to more!

Nice start. I love how you described the battles!

That was brilliant! It was fast paced and you really got the plot moving from the word go. Well done :D

I am so sorry that I didn't get a chance to beta this. (So unprodessional...sorry!) School's a lot harder than I thought it was going to be, and I barely have time to breathe...and the few moments I can catch here and there go to working on writing the next chapter of Eclipse.
Once again I apologize a thousand times over!

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Just thought you should know.

You are one of the strongest writers in the Avatar section. I look forward to reading more of this story.

A very solid beginning. Exciting and plausible. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

Very suspensful, I loved it!

Very interesting so far, looking forward to more!

It's great to read your work again!

This is just my opinion so you might want to get another one but I find your writing style can become a bit repetitive in a poetic way. Don't get me wrong, it's nice to read something with a lot of flow but it's just that 20 words with the same kinds of ideas about love and courage and stuff can get a bit boring. Sorry if that sounded a bit brutal (I know you’re trying to go for something deep and meaningful and not just a full blast action thriller). I felt that was also happening a lot in the earlier chapter of Power of Sacrifice (the repetitive style). I recon you can get away with that style for about 10 words in the prologue and it's great for portraying how deep a relationship is, but try not to overdo it. Of course that doesn't mean cut it out, just try and find a balance. I know it's hard and I shouldn't be telling you it because I haven't cracked it at all but it's cool if we can try and help each other out on equal ground right?