oh i loved this story! it was wonderful, really. a thoroughly good read. :) I loved how you started and ended it with Lute's oddball mannerisms, and Forde's parts were definately my favorite overall. I would look forward to something like this again in the future - maybe a follow up with more perspectives? thanks for writing.

*squeal*! i so totally love this!

Beautiful, and hilarious.

"Can't have a lewd thought in peace."

hee hee hee.

sorry my typos are really bad. ...I really do love your writing style. -- Jes

You've depicted the characters so well. I've always been a sucker characterization. This also ties in with your Tarnish and Legacies... It's Jan 2009 and I'm so into my favourite FE pairing (again). Thank you for contonuing on Set and Eirika's story. -- Jes

LOL '... sword in her sheath'. Is he sketching as he's thinking these things? -- Jes

Well, typical of Kyle to consider the technical sensibility of the spar partnering. -- Jes

I love it. Even if you didn't title this 'Lute' or mention Artur, there is no denying that this is indeed Lute's perspective. -- Jes

Arrgh, i love this chapter. It refreshing to see that at least one charakter "speaks" out what he sees. And what is obvious. I know, he just thinks about it but who cares. He got a good sense for these kind of things. Forde is just funny.
Oh, and Seth and Eirika are just too cute and fluffy and adorable and ...
Yiieks

WAI~ I totally adore the way this turned out. Eirika x Seth are just too much for words! I love the feeling you've put into this and the way you've written one story in different perspectives. There was much emotion all over the place, and there was a nice hint of humor to complement everything as well. Such a wonderful piece! I can't wait to read more of your Seth x Eirika fics! Although I may not review them all, I assure you that I'll definitely read them! XD

Keep up the marvelous work! :)

Much love!

Generally, I review at the end of fics, but this chapter was just so perfectly done I had to congratulate you right now. Hehe. I love Forde's attitude towards Eirika and Seth-- this is, quite obviously, what would happen inside his head. If only you could have a support conversation, say, with Eirika and Forde, after the A-level between Eirika and Seth... XD

I can imagine the dialogue, and I'm probably going to write it now... I'll link to this story, just because chapter 3 inspired me.

*favorite-story'd*

Nice!
Like your story a lot!
But You let me hanging there
I wanted to know if those two ended together.
Anyway love it.

Seth and Eirika forever!
Is my favorite FE couple

Oh my gosh, Forde and his racy comments made me laugh. A different kind of swordplay, hmm?

Then there’s Tana with her need for Ephraim to recognize her as the woman she has become.

And of course, there’s Eirika and Seth themselves, alone in the night with the stars and each other for company. The way you describe her longing for Seth is direct and heartfelt without needing flowery words. And how Eirika finds herself free to pursue her own happiness with him.

Well done. The characters seemed very in character, and their voices all distinct, making it fun to see the same scene from many different viewpoints. The way you captured the characters’ emotions was also very good.

I enjoyed reading this, great work!

Aw.. I had fun reading it! Eirika and Seth forever! Heehee. . Best couple in Fire Emblem! Banzai! *Throws confetti* ^_^

Write more, more, more, more!

Love,

SierralaineWalsh

Gosh i love your writing! you've got great style. please write more! i believe you have great potential!