Did you mean for most of that to be unbelievably sexy? 'Cause it most definitely was lol and I love your humor

Brilliant:

"Yes, it really did wonders for my self-esteem."

"And you're really doing a number on mine right now."

Your dialog is good. The last line of the story was very weak compaired to the rest of it, though.

Very interesting night and story.

Adorable!

aw that was really cute! ]

Aw. I'm not usually a Fred/Angelina-fan, but this is very cute and well-written. And amusing. And in character. So you might have converted me, at least for the time being.

*mouth drops open*Wow...

I LOVED IT! Everything was perfect. Honestly,the dialogue, the dancing, the snowball fight and the kiss. It was simply perfect. ) I loved it!

that was so perfectly in character, i loved it! going straight ot my favourites.

Aw, that was really sweet and well written. I love Fred/Angelina ships, so I'm glad I read this one.

such a sweet, fun, very in character piece... made sad now by knowing what happens with Fred. love the aching feet and Fred not slow-dancing, and the quidditch discussion is so perfectly appropriate. love it. ;)

Lovely oneshot. Really well done.

Much Love,

Santiva Potter

Very adorable, this was! Yet it was still funny and had a nice charm to it. I very much liked this. Well done!

aw. this was cute, funny, sweet and witty. everything a fred/angelina one-shot should include. :) i think you were spot on with thw characterization!

I absolutley Adore it! Good job. Nice fanfic. x