Very funny at some parts, and an all around good story! Keep up the good work!

-signed
Kuro-tenshi Access Time >;D

Finn and Access are in perfect character. Keep it up!

Nice! I loved it! :3

Aw its cute! Even though I still have never read it...BTW...If you dont know who this is, YOUR BRAIN IS DEFECTIVE...
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-RYSS1993