so painfully to come back to find that they wanted somone else to come not you...
i liked that luke's friends wasnt THAT mean and so they accepted Asch return..
your post-game ff was so angest.. for me.. i liked Asch return.. he suffered alot in his life that he deserved to be reward by at least return to his home (somthing that never happend in the game ; ;) i liked also Luke and didnt want him to die too!!

hope to read more TOA from you^^

Ow, OW. This fic was a huge punch in the gut. And I mean that in a good way. This is an excellent read and I really thank you for writing it. As much as we all (as the players) would have hoped for Luke to return... ah, the alternative certainly does hurt a lot.

I especially love how painful it is for Asch when it's obvious how much more of a presence/impact Luke had overall.

Awesome story, great job!

It really touched me, that Asch came back and not Luke. Cause really, Luke would do anything to give back the life that was suppose to be for the original Luke fon Fabre because he was the replica, not the original. I liked how you did the First Day to Seventh Day format, reminded me of the Christian way of how God made the earth. But Asch rebuilds his life, instead of the earth haha.

First order of business, I now officially love this story. I really enjoy finding good post-game fics that deal with the different possibilities presented by that open ending, and Asch is~ my favorite character. Heh, you can tell that death really humbled him. The part with Florian was so cute, and my inner AschxNatalia fan is happy. And the ending. I just smiled, it was perfect.

Reviewing because good stories need more reviews ^_^

Beautiful.

The writing style is professional, the characters are in character, the plot is well thought out...There is nothing bad to say about this fic, because in every way you turn it around, it's still beautiful.
I think what affected me the most was Guy's reaction. I could tell he really cared about Luke, like them time Luke was ready to sacrifice himself in Daath. He was truly sad, not ready to accept Asch, but ready to get angry at him, angry at the world, for the unfairness of it all. You really portrayed that well, and for that, you really are talented.
To sum it up, there is really only two words for this fic.

Beautiful and Breathe-taking.
-Apple Fairy

Oh, My God. This story is just amazing, breathtaking and...by the bible? Okay, skipping that last one... I cannot even begin to describe the feelings that are boiling inside me right now. Oh... I do feel so sorry for Guy...

O.M.G. This is a work of ART! It's absolutely wonderful! It truely is amazing and well written piece. Bravo. I really hope you consider writing more ToA fanfiction, you are quite good at it.

This was gorgeous and beautiful and so SAD, but it was amazing. This whole thing tugged at my heartstrings. Guy's reaction had me tearing up. It was amazing, and I love you for it.

Holy crap, this was amazing. Why doesn't it have more reviews?!

I usually never review unless it's a story written by a friend or a story that's really just that amazing. You fall into the latter category. I hope you write more TotA stuff!

Thank you for writing such a magnificent story. It honestly left me crying not even halfway through. It was wonderful, beautiful and sad.

Love or you ;3
*favs and runs*

Aww, this fic was so sad... and so nice!