T_T its soo..beautiful!

ah that was pretty cute, although she should not have thought of him as a monster to begin with, oh well.
I like how you made them related
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bye

this was sweet. and cute.

T_T SO HAPPY

aw!

nice

I always enjoy stories like this about Naruto. We know so little about Naruto's past, only little snippets of his loneliness and the way he was judged. Stories like this that delve into the mystery that is Naruto without becoming horribly cliched (i.e.: Villagers running after Naruto and beating him and yelling 'you killed my [mother/father/lover/sibling/random person]!) are so rarely seen.

Interesting idea with Yuugao. The whole story was really sweet. Good job.

Excellent! I love these little snippets you write, they expand on the characters without changing them. I saw no grammar issues, except for near the end with 'Moma.' Is that supposed to be 'momma' or 'mama'?

for lack of better words. :(

Yet another awesome little snippet into the lives of the characters. I have to say that each time I see an fanfic alert with your name on it

This is very dark and sweet.