Reviews for Halloween Pitfalls
Emily 7/8/09 . chapter 1
Random, but good! That's just the way I like it!

"Or Macaws?"

: )
Elemarth 10/31/08 . chapter 1
This was a great story for me to read on Halloween! I think that was a very good thought - Halloween witches don't have partners. Very true.
SAM THINGS 10/28/07 . chapter 1
I love it! I love the bit of Nita/Kit
Gin's Comettail 10/3/07 . chapter 1
Haha that was cute!
Uniasus 9/6/07 . chapter 1
Aw, so cute _
Ash 8/30/07 . chapter 1
i whole-heartedly agree. the only reason i like halloween is the candy. they make such fools of wizards on that day. u r a cool author
second daughter of eve 8/15/07 . chapter 1
Very good.
nitakit 8/14/07 . chapter 1
very cute. keep writing
DivideByNegativeZero 8/14/07 . chapter 1
Heh. Oedipus complex...

BTW, this is what happens if you replace wand with wang in certain parts of the Harry Potter books:

Ok

I have found, definitive proof

that J.K Rowling is a dirty DIRTY woman, making a fool of us all

"Yes," Harry said, gripping his wang very tightly, and moving into the middle of the deserted classroom. He tried to keep his mind on flying, but something else kept intruding... Any second now, he might hear his mother again... but he shouldn't think that, or he would hear her again, and he didn't want to... or did he?

O_O

Something silver-white, something enormous, erupted from the end of his wang

Then, with a sigh, he raised his wang and prodded the silvery substance with its tip.
Brianne 8/12/07 . chapter 1
I really liked this! It had a nice tone, every word seemed to have its place, and the Harry Potter references were golden. I particularly liked the one that compared it to Oedipus. But it was a wonderful oneshot, a little snapshot into their lives and a bit of Nita/Kit, which I love.

Good Job!
redflame1020 8/12/07 . chapter 1
Very Very cute. I enjoyed it.
maple the wacky tree 8/11/07 . chapter 1
it was okay. loved the implied KitXNita.
imakeladrygirl 8/11/07 . chapter 1
That was cute! I can imagine how frustrating it would be to have your image so misrepresented in society. Loved it!