| Reviews for Halloween Pitfalls |
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Emily 7/8/09 . chapter 1 Random, but good! That's just the way I like it! "Or Macaws?" : ) |
Elemarth 10/31/08 . chapter 1This was a great story for me to read on Halloween! I think that was a very good thought - Halloween witches don't have partners. Very true. |
SAM THINGS 10/28/07 . chapter 1I love it! I love the bit of Nita/Kit |
Gin's Comettail 10/3/07 . chapter 1Haha that was cute! |
Uniasus 9/6/07 . chapter 1Aw, so cute _ |
Ash 8/30/07 . chapter 1 i whole-heartedly agree. the only reason i like halloween is the candy. they make such fools of wizards on that day. u r a cool author |
second daughter of eve 8/15/07 . chapter 1 Very good. |
nitakit 8/14/07 . chapter 1 very cute. keep writing |
DivideByNegativeZero 8/14/07 . chapter 1Heh. Oedipus complex... BTW, this is what happens if you replace wand with wang in certain parts of the Harry Potter books: Ok I have found, definitive proof that J.K Rowling is a dirty DIRTY woman, making a fool of us all "Yes," Harry said, gripping his wang very tightly, and moving into the middle of the deserted classroom. He tried to keep his mind on flying, but something else kept intruding... Any second now, he might hear his mother again... but he shouldn't think that, or he would hear her again, and he didn't want to... or did he? O_O Something silver-white, something enormous, erupted from the end of his wang Then, with a sigh, he raised his wang and prodded the silvery substance with its tip. |
Brianne 8/12/07 . chapter 1 I really liked this! It had a nice tone, every word seemed to have its place, and the Harry Potter references were golden. I particularly liked the one that compared it to Oedipus. But it was a wonderful oneshot, a little snapshot into their lives and a bit of Nita/Kit, which I love. Good Job! |
redflame1020 8/12/07 . chapter 1Very Very cute. I enjoyed it. |
maple the wacky tree 8/11/07 . chapter 1it was okay. loved the implied KitXNita. |
imakeladrygirl 8/11/07 . chapter 1That was cute! I can imagine how frustrating it would be to have your image so misrepresented in society. Loved it! |