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| Ira the Irate 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseI love it! I love the bit of Nita/Kit |
| Gin's Comettail 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseHaha that was cute! |
| Uniasus 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseAw, so cute ^_^ |
| Ash 2007-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abusei whole-heartedly agree. the only reason i like halloween is the candy. they make such fools of wizards on that day. u r a cool author |
| second daughter of eve 2007-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good. |
| nita_kit 2007-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abusevery cute. keep writing |
| DivideByNegativeZero 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseHeh. Oedipus complex... BTW, this is what happens if you replace wand with wang in certain parts of the Harry Potter books: Ok I have found, definitive proof that J.K Rowling is a dirty DIRTY woman, making a fool of us all "Yes," Harry said, gripping his wang very tightly, and moving into the middle of the deserted classroom. He tried to keep his mind on flying, but something else kept intruding... Any second now, he might hear his mother again... but he shouldn't think that, or he would hear her again, and he didn't want to... or did he? O_O Something silver-white, something enormous, erupted from the end of his wang Then, with a sigh, he raised his wang and prodded the silvery substance with its tip. |
| Brianne 2007-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this! It had a nice tone, every word seemed to have its place, and the Harry Potter references were golden. I particularly liked the one that compared it to Oedipus. But it was a wonderful oneshot, a little snapshot into their lives and a bit of Nita/Kit, which I love. Good Job! |
| redflame1020 2007-08-12 ch 1, | abuseVery Very cute. I enjoyed it. |
| maple the wacky tree 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseit was okay. loved the implied KitXNita. |
| imakeladrygirl 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute! I can imagine how frustrating it would be to have your image so misrepresented in society. Loved it! |