You do have a lot of potential in this story if you just continue it, it would make things a lot more interesting.

That is adorable. Lol. I have to listen to that song now..

Good job : )

i enjoyed it much, great one.

please make a other one were kim and ron meat again. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.

Dude that was a really good story, I fealt rather sad at the end.
I know you said it was a oneshot but maybe you should reconsider.

Aw, that was sad. But great story.

Hmm, a bit sad, but also somewhat realistic...an interesting balance, and while this was more than sufficient for a one-shot, I can also see a plausible what-if future sequel to this as well. Good work.