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justafan
2009-06-05 . chapter 1
that was cute and sweet
LoveJunkie
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
I loved that so much. Really nice read.
Its going in my fav's =)
ArtemisDestiny
2009-01-13 . chapter 1
I think george would be completely oblivious! but nora would have her silent assumptions
The Purple Sharpie
2008-11-29 . chapter 1
i love all of your stories
they are excellent and i love reading them
i also really like you diction
great word choice
SNN
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
This was cool. I like how I got to see Nora's side of Dasey. Twas lovely. =]
nonyalv
2008-07-01 . chapter 1
Oh... this is lovely *hugs it*
Clare DeTamble
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
The style and POV of this story are so different and original, but they work so well. I really enjoyed seeing Casey from Nora's POV. The style you used was beautiful.
splenetic
2008-04-19 . chapter 1
That was sweet. I have a certain affinity for the second person point of view and Nora's internal dialogue really made this work. It was original.
bookworm331
2008-03-26 . chapter 1
you should make a second chapter
AL
2007-12-09 . chapter 1
Very well done.
Chibi Mistress
2007-11-16 . chapter 1
i like the writing style you used. it was interesting to see it from Nora's POV. :]
Lady Imara
2007-09-30 . chapter 1
Ohh, that was good.
princetongirl
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
loved it update soon
MaskedSuperhero
2007-09-15 . chapter 1
uh0ydeah! i love it! update soon! its was awesome there arent that many written from parents point of view :) cant wait for the next one!
iwannabethefirstme
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
love it
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