*Blushes and feels blood start to fall from his nose* Dammit! I need a tissue...*Smiles with a tissue held to his face* This was such a sweet story I loved it! *Collapses from his bloodloss*

YUMMY!

Write more!

- rosie

aw it so cute.

great story. you are such a great writer. I look forward to reading more stories by you.

Now this was freakin' yummy. Ha, gotta love the rain.

These people and their unnecessary criticism *shakes head* you gave us cute mushyness, hot sex and RenIchi love! You should be grateful!

Anywho sex doesn't have to have depth, it can just be sex. Even in a romantic relationship that's all it is sometimes. So I greatly enjoyed and am waiting on more ^.^

*glomps*

Oh. My. God.
That was soo hott!!
**Faves**

Yeah, the sex did lack a little depth.
But I still liked it.
*glomp*

Nice job! Good fic!!

Aww, cute ending and good smut~! That made me happy. *throws cookie* Good gal! x3

'ello! 'ello! I just saw that you posted this on FF, and I had to stop and say again how much I enjoyed it. :) I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.

Another yummy fic. It was a bit jarring when you switched perspective in the second part but I won't say no to RenIchi smexing. Liked the way the initial part was told from Renji's point of view.

You had a good idea with the rain, don't get me wrong, but it did not turn out as /deep/ as I would have hoped. You did really well when it was Renji's POV and I feel that you should have kept it that way the whole fic, it was much better that when we when back to third person. And even if you didn't want to do the sex in Renji's view you could have switched to Ichigo's and it still would have been the same style.

Speaking of the sex, it lacked depth. -Sorry if it sounds like I'm being harsh. I just trying and make my reviews well rounded.

I think with some work you could really do some nice things, you have the basic idea, just put it into better words.

Good luck
~Meagan